Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Educational intitutions play a pivotal role in shaping the career of students. Incohort students, when joining in an educational institution, not only do the expecet quality education but also guidence about which career path to choose as they graduate. The prompt recommends that educational institutions should goad students to choose fields that provide propitious careers. I disagree with the prompt for the following reasons.
Firstly, one decade's lucrative jobs may not be next decades' hot jobs. In otherwords, it would be fatuous to consider that the demand for a particular job would be perennial in this rapidly evolving world. To understand what I meant, let us take a look at a scenario that happened in 1960s. During 1960, nuclear engineering was considered to be most promising and lucrative field for job prospects because not only many countries were involved in developing nuclear weapons but they had also announced a number of nuclear power plants that would aid power production at very low cost with meager resources. Consequently, many graduating students chose nuclear engineering as their major in anticipation of leading luxurios life ever after. However, with various issues raising later in the decade like - NIMBY(not in my backyard) and unfathomable lose that occured at Fukushima power plant(Japan) for no mistake of humans made countries' spearheads to re-evaluate their nuclear programs. The countries were even quicker to halt their nuclear programs as they had apprehensions about what could possible go wrong. Soon, the nuclear engineers were deprieved of hefty packages leaving them in despair and the just graduated engineers soon to become hopeless of their professional careers. Hence, it would only be asinine to encourage the students to choose fields that would fetch them lucrative jobs.
Moreover, one should consider how happy would a person be just by earning surplus money every month. The question to ponder upon at this point is - Is money the panacea? The answer is definitely no. For example, let us consider a person who is interested in pursuing a career in horse riding but instead, she chose a career as software engineer as the educational instition enncouraged its students to hoan their skills so that they would secure a high paying job as software engineer. Though at first she might be amazed to see cool offices, free food and weekend parties, the zeal won't last long. She would soon start feeling nostalgia about what would have happend if she had chosen a career of her interest. There is no wonder that she would come to office everyday staring at her computer screen that has a horse riding wallpaper and repent for the decision she has taken. Moreover, the passion for a job determines how efficiently one works. She might submit the work in a haphazard way only to be vituperated by her boss for the inadvertent mistakes in the project that will only aggravates her agony. And it is no wonder why many people in the software industry face multitude of mental health issues at workplaces. Thus, it is important that the educational institutions encourage students to pursue careers for which they a zealous both for the benefit of the individual and the society as whole.
One can argue that now a days, as there seem to be no dearth in the kind of lucrative jobs to choose from, the educational institutions should exhort the students to only vouch for lucrative jobs. But, is it not a good reason to go after your passion? The liklehood of earning high pay check if one follows their passion is was never as high as it is presently. Hence, it is good if the educational institutions pique students to pursue careers of their interests rather than going after careers that seem lucrative at the moment only to have epiphany later that all that glitters is not gold.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one decade', 'a decade', or simply 'decades'?
Suggestion: one decade; a decade; decades
...or the following reasons. Firstly, one decades lucrative jobs may not be next decades ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1960s'.
Suggestion: in the 1960s
...take a look at a scenario that happened in 1960s. During 1960, nuclear engineering was c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 975, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a haphazard way" with adverb for "haphazard"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ly one works. She might submit the work in a haphazard way only to be vituperated by her boss for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...society as whole. One can argue that now a days, as there seem to be no dearth in the k...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ety as whole. One can argue that now a days, as there seem to be no dearth in the k...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 322, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... pay check if one follows their passion is was never as high as it is presently. H...
^^
Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...y check if one follows their passion is was never as high as it is presently. Hence...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, i mean, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3203.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 638.0 442.535393258 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02037617555 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02579962599 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71127519511 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 319.0 215.323595506 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 987.3 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2342500324 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.392857143 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21731145361 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594694589707 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616956108231 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153176706609 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494012576453 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one decade', 'a decade', or simply 'decades'?
Suggestion: one decade; a decade; decades
...or the following reasons. Firstly, one decades lucrative jobs may not be next decades ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 281, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1960s'.
Suggestion: in the 1960s
...take a look at a scenario that happened in 1960s. During 1960, nuclear engineering was c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 975, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a haphazard way" with adverb for "haphazard"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ly one works. She might submit the work in a haphazard way only to be vituperated by her boss for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...society as whole. One can argue that now a days, as there seem to be no dearth in the k...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ety as whole. One can argue that now a days, as there seem to be no dearth in the k...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 322, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... pay check if one follows their passion is was never as high as it is presently. H...
^^
Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...y check if one follows their passion is was never as high as it is presently. Hence...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, i mean, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3203.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 638.0 442.535393258 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02037617555 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02579962599 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71127519511 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 319.0 215.323595506 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 987.3 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2342500324 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.392857143 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21731145361 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594694589707 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616956108231 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153176706609 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494012576453 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.