The effectiveness of a country s leaders is best measured by examining the well being of that country s citizens Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position

Essay topics:

The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Leadership play's major role in every field, then it may be one organisation, one nation in which country leader whole and sole for making important decision. I Partially disagree, with given statement suggest that, the effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens. The effectiveness of any country depends upon citizen as well as leader.

Leader have certian responsiblity towards country, Even though he elected by minorily or majorly. Leader have power, to arrange people, follow rule. certain law which restrict perosn from doing things. after all, it's shows country reputation in overall world. It may have majorly effected on economically, world wide relation may hampered because of bad reputation. Even though, it partially depends on country's citizen, it's majorly depends upon country's leader.

Country's leader are the representative at international level, so how they maintain there effectiveness solely depends upon there working style, there seriousness to work. The best example ever,United States of America, which firstly under British law and regulation. They form indivisual nation, there every leader put all effort to maintain rank 1 in all over world. Even though, in pandemic situation, they stabalize there economy and remained postion 1 in world. Credit all to gether goes to leader who have take certain diseason according to situation.

In oppsite case, it's partially acceptable on leaders effectiveness depends upon country's citizen. If government had made several law such for example related to Traffic signal, it's responsiblity of every citizen to follow the traffic signal rule, it's benefit for citizen only. Even though, leader have strong attempt to lead, or to make fruitful changes in society. Then it must be depends on citizen how they support.

In Conclusion, Leader have power to take decision to make certain fruitful changes which is beneficial to wards society. One can't regret, it's also equal depends upon it's citizen, whether they take seriously or not. It's actual hampered on international level as well.

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Average: 5.8 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Certain
... power, to arrange people, follow rule. certain law which restrict perosn from doing th...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...hich restrict perosn from doing things. after all, its shows country reputation in ov...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
... have majorly effected on economically, world wide relation may hampered because of bad re...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
... have majorly effected on economically, world wide relation may hampered because of bad re...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... partially depends on countrys citizen, its majorly depends upon countrys leader. ...
^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , United
...riousness to work. The best example ever,United States of America, which firstly under ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...psite case, its partially acceptable on leaders effectiveness depends upon countrys cit...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun law seems to be countable; consider using: 'several laws'.
Suggestion: several laws
...ountrys citizen. If government had made several law such for example related to Traffic sig...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ich is beneficial to wards society. One cant regret, its also equal depends upon its...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, well, after all, for example, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47256097561 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77515903312 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9851416548 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4761904762 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255699211953 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084952896793 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839739916242 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164497082889 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110726613258 0.0667264976115 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Certain
... power, to arrange people, follow rule. certain law which restrict perosn from doing th...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...hich restrict perosn from doing things. after all, its shows country reputation in ov...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
... have majorly effected on economically, world wide relation may hampered because of bad re...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
... have majorly effected on economically, world wide relation may hampered because of bad re...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... partially depends on countrys citizen, its majorly depends upon countrys leader. ...
^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , United
...riousness to work. The best example ever,United States of America, which firstly under ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...psite case, its partially acceptable on leaders effectiveness depends upon countrys cit...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun law seems to be countable; consider using: 'several laws'.
Suggestion: several laws
...ountrys citizen. If government had made several law such for example related to Traffic sig...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ich is beneficial to wards society. One cant regret, its also equal depends upon its...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, well, after all, for example, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47256097561 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77515903312 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9851416548 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4761904762 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255699211953 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084952896793 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839739916242 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164497082889 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110726613258 0.0667264976115 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.