The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Leader in any organization or institution is elected in the hopes that they will bring prosperity and elevate the life conditions of people that put the leaders in position. A country's leader is also the representative and the face of the country in which they serve. Hence, the question of evaluating a country's condition and measuring the efficacy of an leader are intricately related to each other. The prompt claim that in order to measure the effectiveness of a nation's leader the best metric is to examing the well-being of its denizens. I mostly agree to the above position for two main reasons, which I will elucidate below. However, I do concede that there can be other factors that can reason with the effectiveness of a leader.
To begin, a leaders primary job is bring development, harmory, equality, etc. in the nation which they are part of and thus the well being of the citizens is a cruzial factor that can be used to evaluate a leader's position. Most of the famous leaders in the history have one common thing that have brought fame to them and that factors is how they contributed to the well-being of the country's citizens. For eg, Mahatma Gandhi who is consider as the "Father of the Nation of India" has rightfully earned the title as he dedicated his life to free India from the cluches of colonizism. Similar, Sir Martin Luther King Jr fought for equal rights for the all the people in the country. Thus, this two great individual are the paradigmatic example of how the leader's effectiveness is linked to the prosperity of the citizens
Secondly, leaders are selected by the people in the hopes that the leader will present their wishes to the society and will contribute to raise the day to day condition of their lives. Thus, when a leader serves with their best of their ability to work towards the upliftment of the people's conditions who selected them, it is consider to be important factor in determing their position in the next election. Thus, as leader represent the people who selected them, it is important that leader serves to live upto the standard people have hoped for them.
Lastly, factors other that well-being of the people also can contribute towards or degrage the name of an leader. Like for eg. although Atal Bihari servered as India's Prime Ministry position for a relativily shorter time, his work towards making India a super power justifies his name in the book of effective leaders. Likely, a deleterious work done by a leader even if in the hopes of alleviating the condition of the people of the nation, severily defers the reputation of that leader as well as the nation. Hence, we can say that few other factors can also contribute to the effectiveness of a leader.
In conclusion, as is stands today we can conclude that well-being of the citizens plays a important roles to determine the effectiveness of the leader, while a few other factors can also play the role of shifting the position.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2462.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7992202729 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71464874612 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438596491228 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.752528042 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.1 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.65 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248684812727 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090289067611 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543984044412 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151168453253 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840242301178 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.