Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In large societies and nations, it’s very important for the citizens to perform the responsibility of obeying just laws and to reject unjust laws. This will ensure the smooth and structural running of society towards development and enhancement. For suppose, everybody has the constitutional rights provided by the nation and citizens shouldn’t restrict anybody from performing their rights. In a diverse country like India with multiple religions, when some people restrain from others accessing their right to religion or creed, others should stand up to them and confront them. Only because of the indifference and negligence of others, so many rallies involving public violence are happening in India because of religion. When every individual takes up their responsibility to stop injustice, which may not include their involvement in the act but informing police or the right officials would help reduce the negative impact of such acts.
Even when it comes to traffic rules, the numerous penalties imposed by the government just for the safety of the individuals couldn’t affect the decrease in the number of accidents happening every day. These accidents can be diminished greatly when individuals take the responsibility for theirs’ and others’ lives and follow traffic rules properly.
If people develop this innate feeling of doing the right things and not hurt others abysmally, terrible cases involving molestations, eve-teasing, and even adverse cases like rapes, can be reduced widely. It is not the right of an individual to cause immense harm and pain to another individual in vulnerable situations. For example, a lot of acid attacks happened to women as they rejected some men’s advances on them sexually. If everybody stands up and resist an unjust act happening around them, such people can never gather the courage to make such an attack on women publicly. When individuals present at these acts inform the officials in time, these acts can be taken into control before an extreme loss occurs. This responsibility of resisting unjust laws by reaching out to authorities or confronting it in some cases, if developed in every individual brings a great change to the society at large.
Also, citizens should be responsible for laws enforcing no public littering and damage to the environment. When individuals feel responsible for following such laws, we can maintain a good balance in protecting the environment.
Thus, I agree with the statement saying that individuals should feel responsible to follow just laws and rules imposed by the government for the benefit of everyone and stand up to any injustice happening around them. This way, societies can focus on beneficial ideas and progress towards development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'theirs'?
Suggestion: theirs
...individuals take the responsibility for theirs’ and others’ lives and follow traffic ru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2320.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35796766744 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89105280943 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547344110855 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.325604116 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.888888889 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0555555556 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212709050921 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718157978723 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673435508473 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127310978118 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187724666903 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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