Keeping law and order in a state is the responsibility of every citizen. However, it is our responsibility to resist laws that may hamper our daily lives.
Adding on to this, human society has evolved into a complex society. The rules we make are an attempt for a perfect, egalitarian and quixotic place for humans to live. Had the humans been always obeying the same law since its inception, such laws would be obsolete for our present-day society. We have achieved all this through multiple trials and attempts and in our may we had disobeyed as well as a resisted unjust law.
-To give an example how could it be possible for Mahatma Gandhi to vanguard the Indian Freedom for independence against the British, if the majority population decided to abide by the unjust law from the British. Major revolutions and human advancements are a result of the awareness of the general public to disobey the law when needed.
However, this all or nothing statement should be taken with a pinch of salt. Who defines the “just” or “unjust” law? A law might be amenable to one society but it can be intolerable for others. Although the terrorist who kills innocents are just in their case to act in the favor of God, it is an unjust and inhumane act for others.
Although the degree of just is commensurate with the color of one’s spectacles, just laws should never hamper other’s rights and freedoms. Therefore, the individual sense of the dichotomy of “just” is subjective my agreement to this prompt is limited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX
Message: Use simply 'public'.
...ts are a result of the awareness of the general public to disobey the law when needed. Ho...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95038167939 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00593056369 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591603053435 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1914423829 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181956938123 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679729659803 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370240964834 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104994594861 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363697417151 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.