It sounds straightforward that people in a society shall obey all established laws. However, I hold an opinion that, in addition to people's duty of obeying just laws, people also have to resist those unjust laws. To focus our arguments, the value system to determine justness/unjustness of laws is, although also a critical issue, beyond the discussion of this essay. Hence, we are going to discuss with a postulation that we already have a well-defined definition of justness/unjustness. The discussion is first about the necessity of obeying just laws and then the need to rebel unjust laws.
Obviously, to obey just laws make a society operate harmonically. Individuals are easy to determine what one can do and cannot. These laws eliminate conflicts and avoid wasting human resources. Many may disagree with the notion of obeying just laws because they want an absolute freedom, but true freedom of a society can only be achieved by a certain degree of restriction.
On the other hand, people also have the responsibility to resist unjust laws for they may hurt the right of people. Some people may state that people should obey even those unjust articles because resisting them may lead to anarchy. Nevertheless, those laws may be constructed a long time ago or for only some people's interests. So it is important of a society to fight against these out-of-date or inappropriate laws to ensure the people's right and make progress.
Still, others may suggest that one should not involve in those objections against laws if he is not affected by them. However, I disagree with this kind of notion. Even if one is not affected by some unjust laws, one is still responsible to fight against the laws. It is because someone else may be affected and himself may be affected by some other unjust laws in future. Also, by such action, people will realize the possibility of changing existing laws. And this kind of movement makes sure the law is a tool for a society to operate smoothly but a tool to hurt people.
In conclusion, I stand in the position that people in a society should not only obey just laws and resist the unjust ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...icts and avoid wasting human resources. Many may disagree with the notion of obeying jus...
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Line 7, column 363, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y be affected by some other unjust laws in future. Also, by such action, people will real...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87158469945 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86082274657 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472677595628 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7954006108 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.15 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251798948275 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873945000747 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464714281565 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158988871682 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318569157483 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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