Though many consider corporations shall only focus on making maximum profits as long as they obey the restriction of laws, I hold a different position that corporations are responsible to improve environments as well as society by the following arguments.
To begin with, it is true that the first priority of a company is to generate maximum profits in a sense of capitalism, but we shall aware the fact the all human beings live on Earth and involve in societies and that sustainable environments and sound societies are not only the foundation for corporations to make profits but also for people to achieve happiness. Since large corporations, especially those international ones such as Google or Amazon, have tremendous influences on a global scale, their decisions may decide the future of all human beings in either good or bad ways. Thus, companies shall consider the benefits of mankind rather than only their own profits.
A corporation considers no benefit for environments or societies might lead to serious disasters. For instance, the occurrence of Fukushima Nuclear Power Plant Accident was partly due to Tokyo Electricity Company's concern of that shutting down the power plant will shrink its profits. Through this case, it is clear that what is held by believers of capitalism, that the invisible hand will modulate the utilities of the system to achieve a maximum of happiness for everyone within, is merely a dream with a lot of assumptions. So it is irresponsible for corporations to only focus on profits. Besides, corporations have the responsibility to enhance environments and societies.
In addition, contributing to environments such as using clean energy, or to societies such as providing scholarship can not only raise the reputation of the corporations but ensure stable natural resources and sound societies for the corporations to operate with.
In conclusion, with all the arguments list above, it is safe for me to states that corporations shall hold the responsibility to promote environments and societies.
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- Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure 50
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 326.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31288343558 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1614801167 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549079754601 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0700370281 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.454545455 118.986275619 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 5.21951772744 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282242852788 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105421865754 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711563411183 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155889427195 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042503067046 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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