The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
I would like to start the essay by giving the definition of self knowledge. One can achieve self knowledge of he does not have the thought of familiarity in his mind. Thus I totally agree with the above mentioned statement and going to explain about the phrase with my examples.
Firstly , the thoughts of over confidence is the main cause of familiarity, to achieve great things and to go high places in life, a person must be free from familiarity. Say like if our leaders would have developed a thought that I have learnt more and so I can stop acquiring knowledge, It does not make sense right? For example, A.P.J.Abdul Kalam Sir, the President of India acquired knowledge wherever he went and that thought lead him to go places in life and in people's heart. So, familiarity is just pillar in front of you and not allowing you to succeed further.
Secondly I would like to explain about my personal situation. She was been my best friend since childhood and she is extremely talented right from her studies till the sports. But she did not learn new things in life because the her family always demotivates her by saying that she knows everything in her life and need not gain extra knowledge .This develops a thought of familiarity in her mind and thus her knowledge comes to an end with the peak of familiarity.
Though , Familiarity has many disadvantages, it is advantageous in the way that one can gain self confidence which is very much required day-to-day life. For example, if we have learnt everything for the upcoming exam and we just want to refresh the topics. so while reading through the text if we feel familiar about the topic, then we automatically gain self confidence in achieving the goal. Without self confidence, one can never achieve what they want in life .
Thus, I would like to conclude that though familiarity has few advantages, the disadvantage touches the peak position in life .So, to succeed and gain more knowledge in life , one must neglect the thought of familiar. "Learn more and lead a practical life "
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79551820728 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69932055213 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6444234349 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178067866446 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595896319504 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602482526299 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105099166752 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339068777742 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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