The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Knowledge is an evolutionary process. There are innumerable facts and axioms which are prevalent in the world. In addition to that, there are many contradictory notions too. A widely known belief today becomes obsolete tomorrow. People do accept the change inevitably even if there is a contradiction to it at the earlier stages. Despite all the theories, it is true that a person can perceive the newer knowledge to innovate a theory if and only if he or she rejects the familiar.
To begin with, consider the example of Darwin's theory of evolution. The entire community was believed in a certain notion and was reluctant to agree with his theory of evolution. They lambasted Darwin and banished him out of the society. Ultimately, over a period of time, it was his proposals which became widely accepted in the contemporary world. Had Darwin got humiliated and halted his learning process, he wouldn't have come up with his theory of evolution. Hence, it is true that one must not give up in his or her beliefs even if it contradicts the community.
Secondly, developing the self-knowledge is also important along with the rejection of the familiar. For instance, consider Mark Zukerburg, who was the founder of the world's most popular social community, Facebook. He dropped out of the school and began to learn for himself. He believed in his own ability to learn the new innovations and incorporated them in his works, so as to come up with the revolutionary ideas. Mark did not believe in his professors banal way of approach to coding, rather he developed his own thinking abilities and succeeded in his life. Thus, believing in one's self is as important as rejecting the familiar.
Conversely, there are certain cases where rejection of the familiar is detrimental to the society. To support this, consider the case of Bhagat Singh, a famous freedom fighter of India. During colonization of the British over India, most of the senior leaders like Mahatma Gandhi strived to achieve the Independence using non-violent schemes. However, Bhagat Singh contradicted this belief and started firing arms on the Britishers and other public property. Though his bellicose nature was helpful in the earlier stages, at the end there were many negative affects of his truculent nature, not only to him but also to the society. Thus, while one is rejecting the familiar belief and supporting one's own notion, he must take heed of the consequences too.
To conclude, when a person rejects the familiar known knowledge and beliefs, there is a possibility that he can come up with a new approach which would be lauded by the society. However, in certain cases, it could also backfire and cause a threat to the community. Thus, a person who wants to contradict a widely known belief must take extreme care and act scrupulously in order to come up with a new revolution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2390.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95850622407 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80670660555 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50622406639 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2934457699 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5185185185 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8518518519 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07407407407 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125644421018 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387885912684 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045245443635 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751061536095 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206995435519 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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