In the following memo the mayor of the city of Hillview has requested the city council to authorize a huge campaign to attract a giant automobile company to build its automobile manufacturing plant. To explain the need of doing so the mayor has taken support of few fact. He has said that the land of city will a perfect site for the plant as it undeveloped for decades. Company will be having no issue with the staffing and building since thousands of residents here are unemployed. But these all facts are not giving con vincible reasons and conduce some questions about the conclusion. So, it would be perfunctory to accept the request before answering to those questions.
First, mayor of the city has said that the landfill of the city has remained undeveloped for decades. And deduced that it is a perfect location for the plant. But why the land has remained undeveloped for such a long period of time? It could be possible that the land is not compatible with the constructions. And maybe the natural disasters like earthquake storms and volcanoes are the common consequences there. Mayor should look for the reasons behind the development of the land.
Second, mayor has stated that the company will have no problem in staffing and building. For the building the authenticity of the land should be checked first but how staffing is not a problem. In the explanation ahead he has said that the large number of unemployed is in the city because a computer software programming company has abandoned his facility last year. But how many numbers of unemployed are there. Is that mass is enough for a new company staff. Are they all compatible with the mechanical manufacturing based company. Since they have left an IT firm may be they are totally unaware of the mechanical firm knowledge.
And last but not least, mayor has requested for the substantive tax incentives to delude the company. But what if company established a plant and unemployment problem is still there. What if the company is about to make a fully automated plant. Mayor should look for the possibilities.
Summing up, if the tax incentives and other policies are needed to attract the automobile company;it is also needed to look for the possibilities weather the land is good for plant establishment. Will the problem of unemployment be solved. All the unemployed are able to work there or not?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: few facts
...doing so the mayor has taken support of few fact. He has said that the land of city will...
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...as remained undeveloped for such a long period of time? It could be possible that the land is ...
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...mechanical manufacturing based company. Since they have left an IT firm may be they ...
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...ring based company. Since they have left an IT firm may be they are totally unawa...
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Suggestion: an; IT
...ng based company. Since they have left an IT firm may be they are totally unaware of...
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...ed company. Since they have left an IT firm may be they are totally unaware of the ...
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...mpany. Since they have left an IT firm may be they are totally unaware of the mechani...
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...mployed are able to work there or not? .
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243181818182 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.175 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0795454545455 0.0880659088768 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0409090909091 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0272727272727 0.0444667217837 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122727272727 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0477272727273 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80251477567 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00227272727273 0.0016655270985 136% => OK
Determiners: 0.136363636364 0.0997080785238 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0227272727273 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0113636363636 0.0148568991511 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2389.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 407.0 452.878318584 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86977886978 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31941031941 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255528255528 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176904176904 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12285012285 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80251477567 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.7356948742 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0740740741 23.380412469 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9254262666 59.4972553346 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4814814815 141.124799967 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0740740741 23.380412469 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.37037037037 0.674092028746 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 40.6268996269 51.4728631049 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.70093457944 1.64882698954 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477761752776 0.391690518653 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103229926819 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0933527750502 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51793722837 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138323508402 0.149214159877 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181667498102 0.161403998019 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120629967693 0.0892212321368 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.498180818232 0.385218514788 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0845616714658 0.0692045440612 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341914618562 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786857068375 0.0653680567796 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.