Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free

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Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.

What is formal education? Formal education is a well-structured form of education that provides a discipline learning form to the students. In this form of education, the students go through a proper step-by-step learning process that helps them to get to know their skillsets. At some point, students need to go through a proper learning procedure to put forth their skills in the right direction. Thus, formal education is a crucial part of students' lives.

Formal education helps students in providing several disciplined learning formats that include procedural learning of subjects. This type of learning is beneficial for students to focus on different varieties of courses which helps students to gain knowledge from each field. However, if a student is not exposed to formal education, then the student might be forced to indulge in the father's profession. For instance, a farmer who does not have sufficient money to admit his son into formal education then his son will also be involved in farming with him. Due to this reason, it curbs the knowledge process. Formal education is provided by several organizations: schools, colleges, universities, and coaching institutes. However, such organizations put a higher price for providing the services of formal education, which creates restrictions for poor families. But, nowadays, many organizations have organized several free education programs for such families that provide scholarships facilities. This helps to incorporate more students to obtain knowledge through formal education.

Formal education not only focuses on the subjects but also points its focus on different extracurricular activities like sports, dance, music, photography, arts, etc., that help students to mold their career paths according to their interests and skillsets. It is necessary to get exposure to real-life experiences but it needs proper guidance to get ready for it. Thus, formal education plays a crucial role to know about real-life challenges and prepare us in overcoming these challenges.

Students can learn myriad qualities while going through formal education like leadership, boldness, discipline, communication, team spirit, punctuality, management, politeness, truthfulness, and many more. These qualities will help students at some point in their lives and it's better to learn how to excel in these qualities at an initial stage. Hence formal education acts as a tool to bolster the students and burgeoning their growth.

Given the above, it feels that formal education is an important part of life at every stage, and it helps to learn things in a structured format through which we build several qualities in ourselves.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fathers'' or 'father's'?
Suggestion: fathers'; father's
...udent might be forced to indulge in the fathers profession. For instance, a farmer who ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...in these qualities at an initial stage. Hence formal education acts as a tool to bols...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2279.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53155339806 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00847433972 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521844660194 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9700903803 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.523809524 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.619047619 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152888293371 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638292996727 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052889011487 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934340543273 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248937880422 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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