The early man walked on all fours. Gradually, he learned to walk with a hunched back and then in an erect posture. He discovered fire and subsequently came the discovery of the wheel. Man learned how to cultivate land and use the available natural resources. Certainly, none of this wouldn’t have been possible if it wasn’t for his eagerness and curiosity to learn new things and develop his existing pool of knowledge. Similarly, formal education plays a vital part in the development of mankind.
One school of thought might believe that formal education restrains our minds rather than set them free. However, I am of the belief that formal education does exactly the opposite. Any form of basic education will lighten up any man’s world. At an early age, students learn to develop an interest in books and education. Even the most basic form of education can make a lot of difference between the characteristics of any young child. Take an example of a young child being taught ethical codes of conduct and basic mannerisms. These mannerisms could go on to change how the child sees the world as opposed to one who lacks such knowledge.
In India and some other parts of the world, some students travel for hours on an end to attend school. The Indian government has gone as far as to provide free education to the girl child up to the standard of Tenth. Such implementations have vastly helped in the development of an economy. Consider a situation, where such practices weren’t implemented in India, some parts of India would’ve still suffered from a parochial, narrow-minded view which would’ve hampered the growth instead of doing any good. Education is one of the most underestimated forms of resources in the world. While it is true that not everybody can afford even the most basic form of education, many countries have made education easily accessible to such groups of people.
Nelson Mandela said, “Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.” Our ancestors who were deprived of basic education valued education a lot more than our generation to whom education has been made so freely available. And while it is certainly true that a lot of our current billionaires or industry leaders have a high school degree at best, these people knew their passion. Without passion, a lot of these billionaires would’ve been still struggling and education has that power. The power to instill passion in a person, a passion to learn something and a passion to become something.
The statement put forth is subjective to say the least. However, education should not be seen as a cage. It should be seen as a means to open the cage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 647, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...t is true that not everybody can afford even the most basic form of education, many ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, still, then, while, as to, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96061269147 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89701818314 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53829321663 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.263995855 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1923076923 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5769230769 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162990511391 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040079459473 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574021857817 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788536542425 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035139755374 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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