formal educational credentials are most important for hiring an employee

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formal educational credentials are most important for hiring an employee

I am consonant with the topic.Yes, formal education credential is needed for hiring the employee.if we are hiring the people we must take in account to there academic credential in account.people having the good academic background are must likely to be hired than the people having no academic background.There are many parameter which define the people's ability to be hired as a employee.

if the job is related to the high tech company than they should look for the candidate with good academic background.Let's take an example of the ceo of the microsoft company than they must be sound in academy and must have good academic background. people who are entitle to this job are more likely to get mental stress because of the work problem they will be working on.if we hire a person with low academic quality than they are less likely to solve the stress which are given to them.Perhaps, they even can not handle such case.Hence,the people who are hire must of good academic background.

In opponent to the condition that is stated in the problem some of may argue that for low level work academic performance is not necessary i will like to ask them if you are the ceo of the company than will you hire the person whose academic background is good or the person whose academic background is not good. if the low level worker has some sort of academic background than they are likely to make the company production better. if we hire a low level worker with some academic background than that can help to make the understanding of the industry ethics more properly and is easy to implement with in the worker.Hence,i perfer hiring the employee with good academic background.

Now let's take an example of worker in google comapny.It hires the people who are academically sound and are great in academy.The company success lies on the hiring process they only hire the people with great academic background. if we want to make the company success we must go through some startegy that helps to hire the people with great academic backgorund.

Hence,In my opinion people with proper education background must be hire than the people who are not having academic background.I must suggest that company provide the service where they have to deal with the customer problems.These problem can only be solved by the people who are having great academic background.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, so, sort of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89578163772 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72619467052 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389578163772 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9147446611 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 219.222222222 118.986275619 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.7777777778 23.4991977007 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 7.80617977528 487% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133513739222 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692604868657 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054171146689 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934741964714 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547627703876 0.0667264976115 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 14.1392134831 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.8420337079 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.1743820225 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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