Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
I don't completely agree with the recommendation. I think that although government has its own profession and should not be consistently influenced by people's will, it should not make some decisions arbitrarily especially when those decisions are related to welfare of all the citizens.
Some decision making requires a certain degree of profession and knowledge in order to evaluate the result. If the decision is done according to people's will, it could make the things go worse due to lack of background. For example, one of the biggest issues in 2020 is covid-19. If the government let its people to decide whether it should lock its boundary to prevent the pandemic to spread, the people could think that it's their freedom to decide where to go, and thus should not be restricted by some policies. This lack of realization of the possible outcomes could lead to a complete disaster.
Efficiency is also an important criteria in decision making. If we let people to vote for every decision the government should make, it is quite time consuming and would definitely reduce the productivity of the nation. For example, we would need to take five days to decide whether we should increase the money spent on education and take another five days to decide whether we should use the increase budget to increase the teacher's wage.
However, there are some specific topics that should be decided by the citizens. When the consequence of the decision would affect every people, it should not be decided by only a few people in the office due to their possible bias on evaluating a policy. For example, since Brexit is strongly related to every citizen in the United Kingdom, the decision should be made by all of the people, including the rich and the poor, male and female.
Although I agree that government should not unquestioningly carry out the will of its citizen on every domain because some decision making needs a certain level of background knowledge to evaluate the outcome, there are still some important things that need to be decided by all of the people due to its great influence on everyone in the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
I dont completely agree with the recommendatio...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...t. If the decision is done according to peoples will, it could make the things go worse...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... to spread, the people could think that its their freedom to decide where to go, an...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'criterion'?
Suggestion: criterion
...ter. Efficiency is also an important criteria in decision making. If we let people to...
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Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e budget to increase the teachers wage. However, there are some specific topics ...
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Line 7, column 373, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...Kingdom, the decision should be made by all of the people, including the rich and the poor...
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Line 9, column 276, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rtant things that need to be decided by all of the people due to its great influence on ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90304709141 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67428247236 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451523545706 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.1702902163 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.428571429 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177720295196 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597244926009 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590973348625 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115077685298 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348069376831 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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