GOVERNMENT SHOULD MAKE COLLEGE AND UNIVERSITY EDUCATION FREE OF CHARGE TO ALL":
Education is the backbone of the nation and today's students are tomorrow’s leader of the country. The prompt claims that the government should not take any money from college and university education. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the prompt for following two reason which will be outlined below. However, I do concede that, there are a few exception.
To begin, government should offer free education to all because it is going to reduce the debt crisis around the world, especially in the countries in which students take loan from bank to continue their study. For example, students in the Bangladesh cannot do part time job due to lack of job opportunity in the country. They either have to take loan from the bank to continue their study or have to stop their education. If the government provide the students with free education then, the students will not have to take loan from the bank and as a result it will reduce the loan of bank. On the other hand, if it doesn't happen, it will increase more debt of students which eventually create burden on the students to continue their study.
Furthermore, the government should make the college and university education free of charge because it will eventually going to develop the individual and as a result contribute to the development the country. For instance, education edifies an individual and gives him the sense of right and wrong. An educated individual is less likely to do harm to his own country and will work for the improvement of the people. In addition, he is more likely to vote for an ideal candidate in the election, an ideal candidate is more like to work for the betterment of country than to his personal gain. Moreover, an educated person can be a researcher who will do research and solve country's immediate problem and warn the government about the future one. The government can take action in advance and can save the country from the coming danger. On the other hand, an educated person is less like to have sense of right or wrong and as a result can do the work which significantly harm the development of the country.
Admittedly, the government can't make everything about education tuition free because it may create dissatisfaction on the citizen. For instance, government take money from the people and they use it for the smooth running of the country. When the government is making education free of charge that means it is spending much money on the education that means it either have reduce the other facilities that the government offer it's citizen or it has to increase the taxes in people. The increase of taxes can be a burden to the citizen and it can result in dissatisfaction among the people.
To conclude, I argue that government should make free education at all level for the two reason outlined above. However, I do admit that completely free of charge education can lead to dissatisfaction among the general people
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun exception seems to be countable; consider using: 'few exceptions'.
Suggestion: few exceptions
...However, I do concede that, there are a few exception. To begin, government should offer ...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e, students in the Bangladesh cannot do part time job due to lack of job opportunity in t...
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... loan of bank. On the other hand, if it doesnt happen, it will increase more debt of s...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...ee of charge because it will eventually going to develop the individual and as a resu...
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Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...country. Admittedly, the government cant make everything about education tuition...
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Line 6, column 374, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...the education that means it either have reduce the other facilities that the governmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 37.0 12.9106741573 287% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2434.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81027667984 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6872878008 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.373517786561 0.4932671777 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8426161398 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.636363636 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344114062281 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109232421685 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126076978552 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219986362165 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930467997457 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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