government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students
Altough education is for all, not everboy have the oportunet to study in a major school. So, I agree with the following argument that the governments should off college and university education free of charge to all students. Since that colleges and university are expensive, somebody need move to other city for study and I think that schol have be offer for everbody.
My first reason that I agree with the claim, is because institutes that lernes is very expensive, principally university institution. Thus, because of the price, many people can't pay for the study. Many times, some students desist of course becouse they don't pay. For exemple, when I was in university a lot of students that studed in same class with me desisted of course, because they can't pay their bills.
My second reason, is because some students, need moved to other ciy, and when then people don't have money enought, they need back for herwhen. For example when I was in university, I had a friend that he moved for the city of our university, and when we was in the second semester he told me that he was back to his parent's house, becouse they don't achiving pay the bill, buy food and others thing, altough the university was public, he doesn't had many to him.
My third reason, i that all studensts need and have be study free and with quality. And this is very important for a coutry, since that have many students in a coutry better tend be the nation. For exemple, I have seen a paper that was correlacting the study leavel and development of a civilization. The reults was impressionanted, since that the researche showed that than more the number of people with studies was negativelly correlated with crime and consequently it was positively correlated with the development of the country.
In conclusion, I agree and a support that the nation, need offer free schols for everbody. Since that there are people that can't pay for study, other need move to other city and learning is essential for all, rather than when some socity have much sudents and study people, the civilization tend be better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, second, so, then, third, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77472527473 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58238835616 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447802197802 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2053569293 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181062061555 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806645223191 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118863741769 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122051910718 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137017365004 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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