Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Aulthough have levels and kind of people that professior our teacher teatch. I agree with the argurment that the salaries should be based on their students` academics performace.
First, how much you study more abilities you will have. So that, you get much money, time and energy to study years and to be a specialist in one topic. For exemple, professior in University need be PhD and someone is necessary have the post PhD. For you do university, master degree and doctor degree in main a person need about 10 year of study to arrive on this level. So, stay evident that is necessary the person that will get class in university more knowledgment and more levels of studies, compared with a teatcher of hight school.
Second, to teatch for a child and for a aduld pearson is well more complex for adults. Since classes have many pratical class, experimental class and etc. For exemple, in Brazil, on the Unicersity that I studed all courses of natural sciences need a minimum time of expreimental class, and all experimental class that I did, had a elaboreted things that only a professor with PhD could ministrated. Therefore, is possible to see that is necessary professors do especialization and emprove your knoledgment, so that can teatch in university.
On other hand, the teatcher is much important to, because they are the base for all proffitions, and they need do a good job. For exemple, I am a biologist and I’ve wished do this course because I had a grates teatcher during my life, and all them motiveted me to do this course. So that, with this actudie I could see that this level of employes is mucha important because all emplyers need pass for them.
In conclusion, I agree with need have differences between the salary because there are differences on studies levels in the prossior. So that, I belive that is right with professior that had long time studing to be a research or a scietist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80838323353 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77599649661 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502994011976 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4117365541 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125120985655 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550789680253 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138131713952 0.0758088955206 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11869669913 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175529565773 0.0667264976115 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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