Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Aulthough have levels and kind of people that professior our teacher teatch. I agree with the argurment that the salaries should be based on their students` academics performace.
First, how much you study more abilities you will have. So that, you get much money, time and energy to study years and to be a specialist in one topic. For exemple, professior in University need be PhD and someone is necessary have the post PhD. For you do university, master degree and doctor degree in main a person need about 10 year of study to arrive on this level. So, stay evident that is necessary the person that will get class in university more knowledgment and more levels of studies, compared with a teatcher of hight school.
Second, to teatch for a child and for a aduld pearson is well more complex for adults. Since classes have many pratical class, experimental class and etc. For exemple, in Brazil, on the Unicersity that I studed all courses of natural sciences need a minimum time of expreimental class, and all experimental class that I did, had a elaboreted things that only a professor with PhD could ministrated. Therefore, is possible to see that is necessary professors do especialization and emprove your knoledgment, so that can teatch in university.
On other hand, the teatcher is much important to, because they are the base for all proffitions, and they need do a good job. For exemple, I am a biologist and I’ve wished do this course because I had a grates teatcher during my life, and all them motiveted me to do this course. So that, with this actudie I could see that this level of employes is mucha important because all emplyers need pass for them.
In conclusion, I agree with need have differences between the salary because there are differences on studies levels in the prossior. So that, I belive that is right with professior that had long time studing to be a research or a scietist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80838323353 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77599649661 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502994011976 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4117365541 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125120985655 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550789680253 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138131713952 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11869669913 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175529565773 0.0645574589148 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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