Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Since that had the industrial revolution, the Erth ecossistems changed, and this inderectly relate with ecology of animals and plants. So that, have been encreasing the number os extintion in the Erth, therefore I don’t agree with the argument that we only have make efforts to save endagered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activites.
First, all ecossistems in the Erth are connected, and when we make somethng in a place indirectly can afect other place. For exemple, there are a lot of problems in the sea. In this year I saw in a newspaper a news of a Asia coutry that was taking plast on the sea. This actude are intals much problems on the water ecossistem. The result of this actude was showed by a video that make a big repercution uin the internt. The video show the quantitie of plast on the see, and told about the species that eat the plast bag thinking that is algae and daid.
We need preserve the Erth, becauser it is the place that we live. Actualy, we human are changin a lot the landscape of the world. One place that have win a big attention is the Amanzon rain forest. Since last decade this forest have been abruptly extration of animals and plants, a mean five hous are destruided all hour. Ecologists of one universty of Brazil said that this actude can cause much extintion of plants and animal and cause problems in ecologio of other coutry. Sice have many birds that fly for other emispher during the year, and if these birds don’t fly for other cautry can make a eecological desequiliber causing extion of other expecies.
One of most comented problem causing for the human are the warming global. These problem is relate with human since the evolution of the tecnology. The maijor problem is the polar area that are finhing. The area othe the ice that penguin, polar bear and other polars animal had decrease abruptly, and there are less work to decrease this process caused by human.
In conclusion, I think that we have preserve all speceis independently if they are relate with us or not. Since we caused many extinction on the world and are entaling until now.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
... sea. In this year I saw in a newspaper a news of a Asia coutry that was taking plast ...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...his year I saw in a newspaper a news of a Asia coutry that was taking plast on th...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...last on the sea. This actude are intals much problems on the water ecossistem. The r...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'won'.
Suggestion: won
...scape of the world. One place that have win a big attention is the Amanzon rain for...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... extration of animals and plants, a mean five hous are destruided all hour. Ecolo...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...blems in ecologio of other coutry. Sice have many birds that fly for other emispher ...
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Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...on't fly for other cautry can make a eecological desequiliber causing extion...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...extion of other expecies. One of most comented problem causing for the human a...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'These problems'?
Suggestion: This problem; These problems
...g for the human are the warming global. These problem is relate with human since the evolutio...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
...re the warming global. These problem is relate with human since the evolution of the t...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the the ice that penguin, polar bear and other polars animal had decrease abruptl...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'preserved'.
Suggestion: preserved
... In conclusion, I think that we have preserve all speceis independently if they are r...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
...e all speceis independently if they are relate with us or not. Since we caused many ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68766404199 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45149134149 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482939632546 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8885055784 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113064245067 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320864966412 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520118928316 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069622837876 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622683372028 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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