College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
One of thinks that many people think when are looking for a job is a salary, on other hand there are people that find be happiness. Therefore, I don’t agree with the argument that the college students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to job. Since that students have be happy in your job.
My first reason that I don’t agree with the statement is becuase that we need study that we like. Due to when we study and job something that we don’t like meke us bad. Second pscologist that I’ve been reading on newspaper, the job of one person need be something that she or he love, because when we work in something that we don’t like we can get ill. For exemple when I was in college, there are some people that stayed with depression because they were doing the course thinking on the money and didn’t because they liked. Thus, getting clear that is necessary study something that you like.
My second reason relate with thought that some people have (we need study a course that in the future we are able to win a lot of money and be rich) and I don’t agree with this. Since that people direc your ideia on the money, many times they loss the focus and don’t do a good course because they stay desistimulated. The money is important, but it not be in the first attemption. For exempla a professior I have in college that had depression because she was doing a course that she didn’t like, and she always say for us that is necessary study really things wich we love.
Third, when you study a course that you love, you will be good and always shall have job for you. Like some biologist, teatcher and others profissions that are said bad profission have great profissionals. Like some biologist that have tv program, they have study a lot, but I have certly that they make ther study with love. Therefore, it’s clean that always all us have chance to have a good jobe and be happy
In conlusion, I agree completaly with argument since, when we think only money and forget the studies we can get bad and ill. Thus, I belive that the students need study that they like and not only in the salary, because the salary is consequence of our success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s that seem most likely to lead to job. Since that students have be happy in your job...
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Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...o lead to job. Since that students have be happy in your job. My first reason tha...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loves'.
Suggestion: loves
...person need be something that she or he love, because when we work in something that...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ted. The money is important, but it not be in the first attemption. For exempla a ...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
... you will be good and always shall have job for you. Like some biologist, teatcher ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, really, second, so, therefore, third, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 35.0 11.0286738351 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56585365854 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39527097048 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417073170732 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4044690241 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.117647059 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1176470588 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183957911078 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813111785052 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109626842236 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126624583376 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891001055326 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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