government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students
Altough education is for all, not everboy have the oportunet to study in a major school. So, I agree with the following argument that the governments should off college and university education free of charge to all students. Since that colleges and university are expensive, somebody need move to other city for study and I think that schol have be offer for everbody.
My first reason that I agree with the claim, is because institutes that lernes is very expensive, principally university institution. Thus, because of the price, many people can't pay for the study. Many times, some students desist of course becouse they don't pay. For exemple, when I was in university a lot of students that studed in same class with me desisted of course, because they can't pay their bills.
My second reason, is because some students, need moved to other ciy, and when then people don't have money enought, they need back for herwhen. For example when I was in university, I had a friend that he moved for the city of our university, and when we was in the second semester he told me that he was back to his parent's house, becouse they don't achiving pay the bill, buy food and others thing, altough the university was public, he doesn't had many to him.
My third reason, i that all studensts need and have be study free and with quality. And this is very important for a coutry, since that have many students in a coutry better tend be the nation. For exemple, I have seen a paper that was correlacting the study leavel and development of a civilization. The reults was impressionanted, since that the researche showed that than more the number of people with studies was negativelly correlated with crime and consequently it was positively correlated with the development of the country.
In conclusion, I agree and a support that the nation, need offer free schols for everbody. Since that there are people that can't pay for study, other need move to other city and learning is essential for all, rather than when some socity have much sudents and study people, the civilization tend be better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, second, so, then, third, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 22.412803532 201% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 364.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78296703297 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58238835616 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447802197802 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 419.366225166 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.25165562914 559% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3032936292 49.2860985944 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.066666667 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181062061555 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806645223191 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118863741769 0.0662205650399 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122051910718 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137017365004 0.0443174109184 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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