government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students
Altough education is for all, not everboy have the oportunet to study in a major school. So, I agree with the following argument that the governments should off college and university education free of charge to all students. Since that colleges and university are expensive, somebody need move to other city for study and I think that schol have be offer for everbody.
My first reason that I agree with the claim, is because institutes that lernes is very expensive, principally university institution. Thus, because of the price, many people can't pay for the study. Many times, some students desist of course becouse they don't pay. For exemple, when I was in university a lot of students that studed in same class with me desisted of course, because they can't pay their bills.
My second reason, is because some students, need moved to other ciy, and when then people don't have money enought, they need back for herwhen. For example when I was in university, I had a friend that he moved for the city of our university, and when we was in the second semester he told me that he was back to his parent's house, becouse they don't achiving pay the bill, buy food and others thing, altough the university was public, he doesn't had many to him.
My third reason, i that all studensts need and have be study free and with quality. And this is very important for a coutry, since that have many students in a coutry better tend be the nation. For exemple, I have seen a paper that was correlacting the study leavel and development of a civilization. The reults was impressionanted, since that the researche showed that than more the number of people with studies was negativelly correlated with crime and consequently it was positively correlated with the development of the country.
In conclusion, I agree and a support that the nation, need offer free schols for everbody. Since that there are people that can't pay for study, other need move to other city and learning is essential for all, rather than when some socity have much sudents and study people, the civilization tend be better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, second, so, then, third, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78296703297 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58238835616 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447802197802 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3032936292 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.066666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181062061555 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806645223191 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118863741769 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122051910718 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137017365004 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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