College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I don't agree with the argument that college students should base their choise of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. Sincehave much reason that relate with the jobs and oportunity of the students.
First, each students have have different abilites, and the students need do that they like. Since do the dicipline that the pearson don't like, makes the peasrson boring and said. For exemple, I always liked of biology, and when I was do my aplication on university I try to engenier and passed. I stayed thinking about how would be this course. After a time, I percived that I culdn't be happy doing engenier and I change my course to biology, that make me happy. So that, I could learn that we need do that we liked.
My second reason is that always have job for all carrier, but much people make problems when think in changes. Many time that are jobs in far places and the people don't have courage to move of other city. These changes is necessary and I've been seen many friends made this. For instance my friend Rafael moved for other city that was needing engenier. In the bigin he had a litle afraid and today he is much happy with her new life. This actude much time is necessary because in the major town don't have job enough for the society.
The third reason in that when you are good in thinthing, everbody will want you to work. Because, today there are many capacity people, and have a dispult for the job. So, when more study and ability the person had, more chance it will be. As my brother, was invated work in a big factory because he has a great curriculum and he can speaks tree lenguages. So that, how much study the person have more sucess it will have in youre carrier.
In conclusion, I don't agree with statement. I think that the person need be happy doing the things that they like ang emprove the abilites. Since there are much students having depression because they choose her carrier thinking on money and forget that they like.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...always liked of biology, and when I was do my aplication on university I try to en...
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...hat we liked. My second reason is that always have job for all carrier, but much people make p...
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...friend Rafael moved for other city that was needing engenier. In the bigin he had a litle a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46831955923 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17516446547 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512396694215 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3271436333 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22727272727 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140616995331 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467840450477 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846190361225 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109688072436 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118576641398 0.0645574589148 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.