In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Is evident that people groups things different, and much times this can cause discussion or even the solution of problem. I think that our opinion is valid. Therefore, I belive and agree with argument that in any situation, progress requises discussion among the people who have constrasting points of view, for somes reason.
First, when we have a problem, the consensus is the better way to sove it. The contrast of opinion in my thinks is the best way to find a solution, and this action can be observed since the people are children. For exemple, when we were children, we usually made a lot of questions and always wanting the why. Thins atitude in my point view is good because we can have experience with opinions since the young.
Second, is that when we don’t have freedon to give our opinior we can do worse. This is because we need have chance and oportunity to give our opinion. Much time it can affect our pscologic and some times intals else a depression. For exemple, in coutry that had military dictatorship the people says about this. In Brazil, many actor need changed for other coutries and today they reported how they fell. They had tortured fight since they give their opinions for the society.
In conclusion, I don’t have doubt that the dialogue and opinions between the people is the best way to solve a proble or find a solution of something. Therefore, all people need be chance to give our opinion since that this can be better for alls.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...hat people groups things different, and much times this can cause discussion or even...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71923076923 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44783142766 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7603317519 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143987003854 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548932056831 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085173845861 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112347656373 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958437251021 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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