The best way to teach whether as an educator, employer , or parents - is to prise positive actions and ignore negatives one.
Since I was a child, I have recived a severe educadon. So that, I don't agree with the state that the best way to learning is to praise positives action and ignoret the negatives reason.
Firstly, is obvious that is much important elogiate goo actions when somebody are learning. For exemple, professor need motive the students, and the best way to do it is praise the positives actions. However, when a student make some thing that is not apropiate the students need be judge. For exemple, when I was child in my firsties year of my school a boy take my lunch and gave me a fist, when my teatcher knew she mede the suspention of the students. Making clear that is necessary.
Second, parents need highlighting positives actions for the children. When we are child is the best phase of our life that we can see how make good actions, because in this time, many times we are punished. Therefore, since we are children we can get notion that we need only make good things and actions, altough some peoples belive that punish is not best way to educate a person.
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...ough some peoples belive that punish is not best way to educate a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 52.1666666667 23% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.546875 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41522384192 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6252170863 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138645873033 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633625248338 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743969375822 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106772873568 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456550565465 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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