In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Is evident that people groups things different, and much times this can cause discussion or even the solution of problem. I think that our opinion is valid. Therefore, I belive and agree with argument that in any situation, progress requises discussion among the people who have constrasting points of view, for somes reason.
First, when we have a problem, the consensus is the better way to sove it. The contrast of opinion in my thinks is the best way to find a solution, and this action can be observed since the people are children. For exemple, when we were children, we usually made a lot of questions and always wanting the why. Thins atitude in my point view is good because we can have experience with opinions since the young.
Second, is that when we don’t have freedon to give our opinior we can do worse. This is because we need have chance and oportunity to give our opinion. Much time it can affect our pscologic and some times intals else a depression. For exemple, in coutry that had military dictatorship the people says about this. In Brazil, many actor need changed for other coutries and today they reported how they fell. They had tortured fight since they give their opinions for the society.
In conclusion, I don’t have doubt that the dialogue and opinions between the people is the best way to solve a proble or find a solution of something. Therefore, all people need be chance to give our opinion since that this can be better for alls.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...hat people groups things different, and much times this can cause discussion or even...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71923076923 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44783142766 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7603317519 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143987003854 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548932056831 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085173845861 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112347656373 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958437251021 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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