Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.
One of the more complexes things on the life are the studies. Much is the areas and all have consequences on the study. Therefore I agree with this topic since that some studies can cause consequence and make worse to the population.
My first reason is that, some times the researches need to hide the informations of your researche because the security. Since that when you say that are you find answare some body can do faster than you and publish the date before. However there are reserach that was made and the consequeces was saw after like in some bilogy researche. To give a ideia, in Australia have a greate problem with a species of rabbit that was introduced. A researche gove the rubbit and some ran away and intals a great problem in ecology on Australia ecosystem. This situation are always inlutration to say about the risks research.
My second reason, relate to know a results because sometimes can infer the risks the human population. There are a lot resuche that involve nuclear experiment and how all us know this is very dengerous to the population. The nuclear experiment have been made afraid on the word. Since that the dictador of Korea started did experiment with this, and how we already saw, the consequences is large. To illustrate, the second world war that had nuclear bombs in Hiroshima and Nagazaki wich have conseuence until today.
My third reason is because of the need of a surveillance to chek the research. Since that there are research that have riscks, and can cause proble to civilization , is important some that all researche pass for a committee to be proved. Since that this researche is dengereous it need be seve, and the research don’t need stop to search.
In conlusion, I belive that is important and need be know all possible consequences in studies. Autough some researches is dengerou it’s not need stop but be doig with security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84097859327 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66174949903 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501529051988 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0175561625 60.3974514979 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.3157894737 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108685027076 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380291779961 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346644838809 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684857038975 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309057278521 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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