Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Is obivious that have much thinks and kind of carrier. Some people think that is necessary study a course that you will win money, on other hands, some people belive that not. I don’t agree with the argument that education student institution should dissuade students from pursing fields of study in which they are unlikely to success for some reasons.
Firstly, everbody have a ability that much people can not have. When we are good and make effort to do somethings we always have the reward. For example, I had in my master degree a professor, her names was Kátia. She told me when he was young he wanted study biology, and yours parents didn’t agree with her choose because this carrier did not paid well. However he decided and don’t imported with ther comentary and studed biology. Today he is a great Brazilia botany specialist that have a great salary. Therefore, staying evident that is possible when you have effort.
Second, is impossible know if a profission is good or not. This is very relative, because involve other factor. Actualy, many people have problems to moved by other city, some times losing the job because of this problem. For instance, I had a friend that studed math, and in our city he didn’t find a job, so he moved for a city and started job in a great job. So that, in some case is necessary moved and have change in our life to find a great job.
Third, is frustranting try someone change your area. Since the people have drean and abilities, they try and dream work with this, and in many cases some teatcher make it like had been with me. Since I was child I dreamed with study biology, and when I was in my hight school a professor said to me that bilogy course were not good. I got very sad, and I thought chang my profission and when I was do my application I chose engenier and after I change to biology, because I percived how I would be sad studying something that I don’t like.
In conlusion, I don’t agree with the argument, and I think that all carrier have your difficult, however is necessary make your effort and love that you choose. So, I belive that the schools need encourage the students do the course that they want, and be happy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...some reasons. Firstly, everbody have a ability that much people can not have. ...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... Firstly, everbody have a ability that much people can not have. When we are good a...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'pay'
Suggestion: pay
...her choose because this carrier did not paid well. However he decided and don't...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...because this carrier did not paid well. However he decided and don't imported with...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
... Third, is frustranting try someone change your area. Since the people have drean ...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...e people have drean and abilities, they try and dream work with this, and in many case...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., they try and dream work with this, and in many cases some teatcher make it like...
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Line 7, column 400, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...ught chang my profission and when I was do my application I chose engenier and aft...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, well, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 33.0505617978 206% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58897243108 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40351791887 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498746867168 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7628214566 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1904761905 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170256459534 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518086300642 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911518228647 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109911843486 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106219654229 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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