Essay topics: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Is obivios that sports and social actives is necessary and good for a college our university students. Therefore, I agree with the statemant that "At universities and college, sports and social activities are just as important as class and libraries and shoud recive equal financial support" and I have two reasons to support my opinion, since that the two activites is essencial and need be applyed to students.
First, sport is essencial for a health life and need be offered for all students. The necessity of the students doing a fisical exercice have been mentionated for expecialist and they need do that. However, in many times this activites doesn't have a good financial support, doing hard to develop this activeties. For exemple the college that I studed, didn't have any support for students doing fisical execise and this was horrible for studens. Thus, if we recived a little of money to invest in sports, I belive that this would be many differences on the life of students.
Second, it is necessary the students do social actives for intelectual growth. Although can bee simple some social activeties is necessary a minimal of money to develop this. Actually, there are some schools that make much social activity with the students and they can see goods feedback. For instance, when I was in high school, my teacher of fisical exercise make a small project with the instituition thar treat the old people. In the begin, was very strange for us, however with the time we was normal for us. With this activity, I could get more atention for people and make me better. Since I was being the good for other peoples.
Third, doing social activities is good for development of the students. Since one person make the beeter for other, they usually ever do the best for the people. As I read a intervew in a pscology journal said that is essential for children make social action, and is important that all schools make some with the students. Since this activeties helpe make the personality of the people and the student and making good for them.
In conlusion, I agree with the argument, and I guess that is necessary a investment in sport and social activets for all students. However, when the school doesn't have a money need doing the cheap activities to do the best for the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, for instance, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84634760705 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58267112775 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450881612091 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0470859529 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182710203528 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693992251733 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691721268981 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138416820312 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960763378135 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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