Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I don’t have doubt that say true is good and the people need do this more. So that, I agree completly with the statement that always telling the truth is most important consideration in any relationship between people. Since I have three reasons involving importance, ethic and need for all people to tell true.
First, the ethic say that evertime about everthig is necessary say true. Since that is the base for our nature. When a person say true for other and for all, he will always be a good person because is important say the true. The truth is not in the simple people but in a major, a lawer, a chil. And is necessary that the people say it. For exemple, when I was a child, I saw my brother broken a glass in my house, and I don’t tould for my parents. After a time, my pirents was looking for this glass and they thought that someboy have stolen. So that, I said for my parents and they argumented with me to say the truth, because we need be honest, and my parenst said me importance to say the true.
Seconde, we need have confidece in the people, ande when we are a not truth person we don’t belive in others. Not is all, but many politicans have stolen money of society and making corruption. And much of then have conflit with ohter, because some one is honst and say the true to the person. For instance, in Brasil there are a big problem with corruption and there are conflits with ther persons how say the true and with that don’t say the truth. It’s not good for a country or a city, since that this actions have intels bad things for others.
Third, say the true is good and necessary for society and for the people. I always read things about the pscologist, because I think very interesting althought I don’t study pscology. And a day I read a pscologist journal tha was saying the importance to parents learn the children say true. Since they grew with good thinks. However, is necessary be strong and always remember them this importance.
In conlcusio, I belive and affirm that is important all people say the true. Since that we are living in a hard perild that have much liers, we are needing true people for our government and it important for the nature of the children. Therefore, all people need say the true and make the others say, because the world need of people that say true.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...cause we need be honest, and my parenst said me importance to say the true. Secon...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... we don't belive in others. Not is all, but many politicans have stolen mon...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...f then have conflit with ohter, because some one is honst and say the true to the person...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...For instance, in Brasil there are a big problem with corruption and there are conflits ...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ood for a country or a city, since that this actions have intels bad things for othe...
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Line 7, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to parents learn the children say true. Since they grew with good thinks. However, is...
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Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e are living in a hard perild that have much liers, we are needing true people for o...
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Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... a hard perild that have much liers, we are needing true people for our government and it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, second, so, then, therefore, third, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48951048951 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.394764295 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412587412587 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 14.0 3.51792114695 398% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7574931969 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115674197647 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473868568291 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987140036946 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100456605045 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104311985396 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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