Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Aulthough have levels and kind of people that professior our teacher teatch. I agree with the argurment that the salaries should be based on their students` academics performace.
First, how much you study more abilities you will have. So that, you get much money, time and energy to study years and to be a specialist in one topic. For exemple, professior in University need be PhD and someone is necessary have the post PhD. For you do university, master degree and doctor degree in main a person need about 10 year of study to arrive on this level. So, stay evident that is necessary the person that will get class in university more knowledgment and more levels of studies, compared with a teatcher of hight school.
Second, to teatch for a child and for a aduld pearson is well more complex for adults. Since classes have many pratical class, experimental class and etc. For exemple, in Brazil, on the Unicersity that I studed all courses of natural sciences need a minimum time of expreimental class, and all experimental class that I did, had a elaboreted things that only a professor with PhD could ministrated. Therefore, is possible to see that is necessary professors do especialization and emprove your knoledgment, so that can teatch in university.
On other hand, the teatcher is much important to, because they are the base for all proffitions, and they need do a good job. For exemple, I am a biologist and I’ve wished do this course because I had a grates teatcher during my life, and all them motiveted me to do this course. So that, with this actudie I could see that this level of employes is mucha important because all emplyers need pass for them.
In conclusion, I agree with need have differences between the salary because there are differences on studies levels in the prossior. So that, I belive that is right with professior that had long time studing to be a research or a scietist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 334.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80838323353 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77599649661 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502994011976 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 705.55239521 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4117365541 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 23.324526521 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.70786347227 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125120985655 0.218282227539 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550789680253 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138131713952 0.0701772020484 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11869669913 0.128457276422 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175529565773 0.0628817314937 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.5979740519 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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