Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Every society selects a group of people to govern them.This group of people aka "the goverment" is heaped upon with the responsibility to look after that society.They are responsible to create laws and ensure that those laws are being followed.One of the major role of the goverment is to solve issues the society is facing.These issues can be of immediate concern or issues that might create problem in the future.The Goverment however, should be prioritizing the former but at the same time shouldn't ignore the latter.
Immediate problems of today should be of utmost importance.As, these problems are creating hardship for the people at the moment.The goverment must focus on tackling them instead and move on to the bigger problems.For example, people of a certain area are complaining about the foul smell coming from nearby gutter.The MCD of that area however, is busy planning the road development structure that is suppose to take place in 6 months.The MCD claim that all this is for the benefit of their people.But, insted they should allocate resorces in covering the gutter which is causing inconvience and might even be dangerous due to the toxins realeased from it or worse, if somebody falls in it.The goverment however, should also look into the future as well.
There are some issues which take long time to reslove and if precautions aren't taken beforehand, could cause cataclysm . Institutions like Healthcare, education involve a lot of time setting up .In situations involving them, preplanning is necessary.During the recent 2nd covid wave that hit India which the goverent had certain indication about, a lot of deaths occured due to shoratge of oxygen.Had the goverment been responsible enough to prepare the healthcare system for the whole situation, this many lives wouldn't have been lost.After hitting the bump, thecenter as well as the state goverment tried their best but it was too late.
In Recapitualtion, the governing institutions should focus in the immediate problems but anticipated problems involving certain institutions like healthcare, Education which take a long time to implement must not be ignored as later on they could cause a lot of damage to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23876404494 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9756470092 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 23.0359550562 308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.876586231 60.3974514979 362% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 373.0 118.986275619 313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.2 23.4991977007 303% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.21951772744 268% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173768256746 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097917458081 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548779109382 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114071789688 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500957899958 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.9 14.1392134831 275% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.59 48.8420337079 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 12.1743820225 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.38706741573 134% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 11.2143820225 271% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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