The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A society is a culmination of the people residing in it.The well-being of a society is defined by the well-being of its inhabitants.The well-being of the people depends upon the rules & regulations imposed by the authority responsible. If the people are happy and thriving then we can say that the authority is doing well .However,if there is suffering,poverty and corruption among the people then the reliability of the authority comes under question and hence, needs to be questioned.
The governing institutions are made up of people which sometimes influenced by personal benefits passes laws which might not be in the best interest of its people.In such cases it becomes mandatory for the citizens to raise their voice.For instance , In late 1900 American women were deprived of voting rights.However , certain section of the female society found it unfair and hence, led to the women sufferage which ultimately granted them the right they were fighting for.But, questioning authority shouldn't means violence.
There are times when only a certain section of people find the authority rules unfair as they are interfering with their convienece.In such cases,the authority is not at fault .For example, If a person breaks a traffic rule since he was in a hurry.However, it is no execuse to violate the law.These law are made for the wellfare of the whole community and if certain section find it unfair then that certain section is at fault and not the authority.
In recapitulation , Inorder for a society to grow and prosper then it becomes necessary for the people to question the authority at times in a non-violent manner.However,there are times when the reason behind people's retailiation is personal greed.In such cases,the auhtority should enforce those laws for the greater good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 288.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22569444444 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15594223379 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524305555556 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.565839934 60.3974514979 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 301.0 118.986275619 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.6 23.4991977007 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.2 5.21951772744 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227134651077 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133979443545 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448577076341 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140222006812 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494249774301 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 14.1392134831 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 48.8420337079 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 12.1743820225 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.7820224719 229% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.