Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances times and places Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing

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Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Any country is only as sane as the laws that are governing it.Laws made by the lawmakers hold the most importance and plays a vital role in defining the country.From governing the people to setting limits for the goverment incharge, laws form the backbone of the country.Laws also provide structure to the judicial system of the country.Millions of peoples go to court in hope of getting justice through these laws and many times situation arises where the truth is hidden under a layer of lies and unfavourable circumstances.Hence, inorder to get proper justice, laws should be flexible enought to consider various circumstances, time and places.

According to a famous saying " justice to an innocent is equivalent to putting 100 culprits into jail" . Every year millions of people knock on the courts door with one issue or the other.Some of them are quite starightforward, but some require futher investigation.Therefore, laws should be made with clauses such that they can adjusted according to the given situations. Suppose, a person is driving at a very fast speed of approximately 80 km/hr in a neighbourhood where maximum speed is of 40 km/hr.However, his father os suffering from cardiac arrest and needs to reach the hospital fast.According to the defined law, the person has broken the traffic law and has to pay a fine but given the circumstances he was in, his fine was dismissed.

Laws are made for the people only.So, it should be the duty of the lawmakers to accomodate room for errors, since no law is perfect.It's intention may be in the right direction but it doesn't always fit correctly everytime.Hence, by considering various circumstances, time and place, the laws make sure that atleast the chances of an innocent being framed is reduced.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, so, therefore, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08561643836 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33637954051 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 23.0359550562 252% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.059070433 60.3974514979 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.0 118.986275619 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 23.4991977007 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.21951772744 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144666242232 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713621560584 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524243292097 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104610898233 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354823843852 0.0667264976115 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 14.1392134831 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 48.8420337079 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 12.1743820225 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 11.2143820225 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.7820224719 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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