Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.

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Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.

It is government's duty to allocate budget to natinal activities such as defence, infrastructure, education, art, sports etc. Each year major part of budget will use for military and defence precedented by infrastructure, but the art and other cultural activities related funds are less. Although natinal safety, intigrity of nation and control over country determine the prosperity; art defines richness of culture, wisdom in people, standard of living, openness in people, so government should promote art as much as national security.

Firstly, many of the military and defence related breakthroughs are emrged from one or the other form of art. Consider, the designs of Da Vinci, who inspired the shape and mechanism of chopper. Art is not just about drawing and putting an individual's thought in it, it is about thinking beyond limits. The art is the reason we are able to use air-crafts, else we were so constrained by the belief that, human can not fly. It is known that, before the use and development of number system, the essential part which is zero, was misssing from the number sets. The drawings from Aryabhatta, which suggests that the world was started from a point and will submerge in it, gave the very idea about the properties and shape of the zero. It you mutiply it with some number, it will destroy that number, but if you devide, then there is endless possibilities.

Another reason, art can be in many forms, such as music, drawing, litrature, sculptures. Early humans were used to draw figures in cave, to left messages and show some techniques or to describe the creatures live in that area. That information still used by archeologists to depict how the evolution happened. Music and litrature always had great influence over history. The litrature like Bible, Gita, Mahabharata, Kuran are the very reason behind our belief in exixtence of the God. They didn't just inspired us to pray the daities, but to warship them, protect them, gave us the reason ton fight with our own kind. Sometimes they may posses negative influence over human mind, but the influence is noteworthy. Music is most importabt factor behind the preservatiuon of African culture in America, consider Jazz, which evolved as a form of protest against the racist society in mid 20th century, America.

Lastly, the defence is imporatbt part of any nation to keep nation integrity intact, but the integrity and freedom fisrt starts from inside of every citizen. The faith in freedom, the constitution, and openness keep the nation strong. If a country don't have good military, thay can train them, but if a country don't have faithful and free citizens, there is no coming back. That was the reason few Spartans, fought agains the persian armies and gave a strong fight, because they were free people not the slaves.

In a nutshell, the art in different forms, inspire the people to keep the national integrity and culture strong and inspired people. The purpose of military is also to keep national borders safe, so gevernment should eaqually focus on both of the areas.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, so, still, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2564.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99805068226 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63372809506 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539961013645 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 801.0 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0489067336 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150306140989 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338757893385 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428210389908 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784323270621 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566786430491 0.0667264976115 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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