Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Military is an essential factor in any nation. A country with a paucity of military is vulnerable to attacks and threats but arts are significant to the development of a nation as well. While military can defend a nation from potential threats, arts has the power to the increase a country's economy. So, Governments should allot some budget to the arts as they do for the military.
For any country, military and arts are equally important. While, military denotes power, arts denote harmony and worldwide spread.Arts and culture can have a disseminated effect on the world. A nation will be adored among population across the world for their culture and art, so it is important to preserve something that is considered esteemed in the world, in order to protect the reputation of a country. Hence, governments should invest both in arts and military.
Art lovers from various parts of the world can be enticed to the country and there by increasing the tourism. The fact that tourism can benefit a country to a great extent is not arcane, governments are well aware of the fact that tourism can provide with many benefits such as a good relationship between countries, financial support and also increase in the business of the local products.
An increased number of tourists at a place can help the local vendors grow and therefore increasing the overall economy of the place, these countries can maintain an accord with other countries. Hence, tourism has an auspicious effect on a country and tourism cannot be promoted by military, it only prevents tourists from entering into the country, but it can be promoted by arts and culture. Therefore, government must underwrite the field of arts as well.
In any nation, majority of the people are civilians and hence, arts that denote the common life should be given as much importance as the military for the proper functioning of mundane activities.
Military is often considered as a gauge to ponder the power of a nation. A stronger military force can reduce the threats a country possess from other countries. Hence, it is not advisable to cut down on the financial support for military but from the above mentioned points, it is evident that arts should be promoted as well. So, the government must balance the budget between military and arts.
World is full of threats, there are many countries that believe in the power of war and not arts or peace, if a country has to defend itself from such countries with frivolous objectives, then it should rely on the military. Therefore, military should be amply equipped in order to defend its nation from any potential threats. Hence, it is not advisable to cut down on the military budget.
Hence, Governments should evenhandedly distribute the budget between military and arts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Arts
...rts denote harmony and worldwide spread.Arts and culture can have a disseminated eff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94882729211 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68729979519 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426439232409 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3366362239 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3181818182 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337925679718 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124064819382 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939892160858 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178401557417 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854172624275 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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