Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students
University level education is so costly. There had been many controversies on whether it should be free or it should be charged .Although free education would remove all the economic burden from the students and they could focus only on study. I think that it should not be totally free and I will be discussing its pros and cons in following paragraph.
Firstly, due to high university cost only few students who are interested in achieving academic degree pursue their university education. If it were free, every student will join the classes. Ans since it is free, student would not be consider the worth of that education . I bet the number of student dropping in mid semester will be more. The money investment in the education would at least force people to continue their education. But people often do not value the things that they get for free.
Secondly, The fees collected from student can be used for the betterment of the universities which further provides great study material and healthy environment for students. Well equipped laboratories and research programs are possible because of that . If students are not charged , the investment for universities should be collected as more tax from people . And this will thus increase tax rate. Even those people who do not have child may pay for it . This may bring about other problems in the country.
However, it is evident that many bright student are dropping their education just because they are financially poor. For example Steve Jobs quitted his education as his family was going through financial crisis. For those bright and hardworking students, there should be some policy of scholarship and funding so that great talent lose their opportunity to learn and then later contribute more to the society only because they did not had sufficient money.
In conclusion, university education should not be free but it should a little flexible according to students caliber and their financial condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, at least, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09538461538 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65358360878 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550769230769 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1322258472 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1578947368 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315570728475 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102404952799 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940464199851 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207568007532 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954178093746 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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