Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all
students.
The prompt suggests the idea to provide free education to college and university going students. Providing free education to all the student is not the right way to provide education. I disagree with the prompts main idea.
Firstly, education as we all know is one of the basic that every student should have, but to provide free education to all the college and university level student is not great idea. The idea to provide something free to everyone without having any idea about the the financial, education background about the student is not the best way to workout. In an college or university, student from multiple family background come to student and acquire knowlege. The parent of a student can be a well renowned businessman or the parent can be a daily wage worker, who can't even afford to buy three meals a day. So will it be equally justificable to wave of the fees of both the student, won't it be a naive and vague decision to do so, isn't it? Can't we divide the people based on there finicial background, just so that we can have a rough figure who need a free waiver and who not.
Furthermore, is it truly responsibility to provide free education to provide free education to college and university going student. As the college and universities can be publically or privately own. Proving fees waiver for a student at an private university will be a bad decison to go ahead with. As most of the private colleges and universities are own by politicians and businesowners. The quality of education they migh provide will not be in the hands of government organization. Rather than doing so, the government can provide free education to student pursing course at an government college or university will be a good decison with a condition of financial background check, just so that the need is offered only to needy person.
Lastly, if governement started providing free education to every student, there will be a surplus pressure on the government budget. As the educational fee of all students can talk a large chunk of governement money. This can cause even more problem, as the same excess money could have be used for some different cause.
To conclude, I would have definelty agreed with the prompt if it provided with the idea to provide free education to only a groups of students who are in actuall need, rather than to provide to all students.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... everyone without having any idea about the the financial, education background about t...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... everyone without having any idea about the the financial, education background about t...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dent is not the best way to workout. In an college or university, student from mul...
^^
Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... parent can be a daily wage worker, who cant even afford to buy three meals a day. S...
^^^^
Line 2, column 689, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...f the fees of both the student, wont it be a naive and vague decision to do so, is...
^^
Line 2, column 729, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...be a naive and vague decision to do so, isnt it? Cant we divide the people based on ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 738, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...e and vague decision to do so, isnt it? Cant we divide the people based on there fin...
^^^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be publically or privately own. Proving fees waiver for a student at an private ...
^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
.... Proving fees waiver for a student at an private university will be a bad deciso...
^^
Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...government can provide free education to student pursing course at an government ...
^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ducation to student pursing course at an government college or university will b...
^^
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...plus pressure on the government budget. As the educational fee of all students can...
^^
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...em, as the same excess money could have be used for some different cause. To conc...
^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a group' or simply 'groups'?
Suggestion: a group; groups
... idea to provide free education to only a groups of students who are in actuall need, ra...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75786924939 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75635206042 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452784503632 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4045682316 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.421052632 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422567604429 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160456791596 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121063159103 0.0758088955206 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254954924353 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074417125414 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... everyone without having any idea about the the financial, education background about t...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... everyone without having any idea about the the financial, education background about t...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dent is not the best way to workout. In an college or university, student from mul...
^^
Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... parent can be a daily wage worker, who cant even afford to buy three meals a day. S...
^^^^
Line 2, column 689, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...f the fees of both the student, wont it be a naive and vague decision to do so, is...
^^
Line 2, column 729, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...be a naive and vague decision to do so, isnt it? Cant we divide the people based on ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 738, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...e and vague decision to do so, isnt it? Cant we divide the people based on there fin...
^^^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be publically or privately own. Proving fees waiver for a student at an private ...
^^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
.... Proving fees waiver for a student at an private university will be a bad deciso...
^^
Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...government can provide free education to student pursing course at an government ...
^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ducation to student pursing course at an government college or university will b...
^^
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...plus pressure on the government budget. As the educational fee of all students can...
^^
Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...em, as the same excess money could have be used for some different cause. To conc...
^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a group' or simply 'groups'?
Suggestion: a group; groups
... idea to provide free education to only a groups of students who are in actuall need, ra...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75786924939 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75635206042 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452784503632 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4045682316 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.421052632 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84210526316 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422567604429 0.243740707755 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160456791596 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121063159103 0.0758088955206 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254954924353 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074417125414 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.