Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
Education is important for country and children. The statement states that government should offer college and university education free to all students. Let everyone to acquire the chance to study in college seems quite excellent for making the country’s average knowledge more advanced. However, I disagree with this statement. Here are my reasons.
First of all, if the college and university don’t charge any tuition from all students, it may let the burden more onerous for government and university. For example, college doesn’t have the budget to build new buildings for students to have more comfortable study environment, or even can not hire the teachers to teach. Without the tuition, although, let more people to get into the college, the quality of the learning is terrible for students to obtain the knowledge.
Even if the university get the money from company’s patron, having new buildings and hiring top notch professor. There might have the chance that professors don’t pay effort on teaching the skills. Professors don’t have any responsibility to students because the students no need to pay any money to get into college. The less attention and effort paid by the professor, the less knowledge will the students obtain. Although it is free for everyone to study in university, students still need to get a job to earn money after they graduate. Without the skills and knowledge, they might have difficulties to fit in the society.
Some people might argue that if the college charge the tuition, then there would have some students could not afford. Their education will be deprived. However, the university and government should offer the subsidies for those who can’t afford the tuition. Rather than cancel all the fee from students. The college and government would still have the income to improver the education to all the students and also solve the problem of poverty.
To conclude, government should not offer free of charge for ‘all’ the students. It might lead to the bad quality of the learning and affect the efficiency of the professors. The government also should not deprive the right of education for all people, so government should offer subsidies for those can not afford the tuition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
...patron, having new buildings and hiring top notch professor. There might have the chance ...
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Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...o government should offer subsidies for those can not afford the tuition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, still, then, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18630136986 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65719528978 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457534246575 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7706251326 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0454545455 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31818181818 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435770272153 0.243740707755 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13209457011 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159564761263 0.0758088955206 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274680834428 0.150359130593 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116519485405 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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