Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People in today’s world have become too dependent on automobiles. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Over the several decades progress, the automobiles transform from horses to cars. Nowadays, the cars are so common in our daily life. In my opinion, people are too dependent on automobiles today. There are two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay that make me feel this way.
To begin with, people is indifferent about the issue of the air pollution which caused by the by product emission from vehicles. The earth is facing the serious global warming and that is the problem which everyone in the world know about. But the government and the citizens on the planet don’t take any effective actions to regulate the automobiles in order to slow down the global warming. People still drive the cars to the nearby supermarket or having lots of excuse for not taking the transportation which is quite convenient now. For example, I asked my father who drives car to commute everyday that why he keeps driving the car to work and knowing that the fuel and the gas are harmful to the environment. However, the answer makes me feel disappointed. He said that he doesn’t care about the nature or the planet, driving car along could be more comfortable without taking the crowded transportation. This answer is definitely a sign of our modern life. Over rely on the automobiles and neglect the cautions from the earth.
Secondly, the automobiles on the road are way too much. The exceed cars make the road easily to be blocked. For example, in my country, a family possess more than one car. Everyone is extremely obsessed in having the automobiles. Therefore, during the weekend or the harsh hours, there are lots traffic jams. It should take about 3 or 4 hours to get out the traffic jam. But everyone still loves to drive their own cars rather than taking the transportation, such as train, bus or other high-speed rail.
To conclude, I strongly believe that people today are too dependent on automobiles. This is because ignoring the damages to the Earth and making the transportation systems debacle in the major cities to fulfill the lust of the automobiles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ked my father who drives car to commute everyday that why he keeps driving the car to wo...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tomobiles on the road are way too much. The exceed cars make the road easily to be blocked...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84916201117 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67562919787 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550279329609 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2152433087 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138355558919 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462432622167 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064652668006 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943354068659 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451880462719 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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