Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The aspect of the free university education is a controversial issue nowadasys. In many countries the education in public universities is free in contrary with other where students are obliged to pay tuitions. It is my personal belief that when a students fulfills all the requiments to be accepted in his/her preferred university and cannot afford the tuition, the government should offer a free university education.
On the other hand, there is a wide range of people who assert that all students should sustain the high expenses of the tuition as this money maintain at first the enormous facilities of a university and secondly promote the research and syrvey of university in many scientific fields. The supporters of the above claim condend that the students who are not in position to pay the tuition should take advantage of various loans that banks are granted for their studies. For instance, especilaly in USA, where the tuition in perminenet universities is very high, the student loaans are very popular and a common way for someone to afford the high expenses.
Though, even if these loans are seeminlgy a sustainable solution, in many cases the students are forced to pay for their student loans many years after their graduation and if they have not a satisfied salary, they trapped from a very young age in a misery life with all the economical stress upon their shoulders. The gonvernmets should provide assistance to these student by offering a free education requesting by the poor students to provide all the necessary authorized papers which demonstrate their incapability to pay the tuition of their unoversity. By this way, the governments ensure that the upper education is not only the privilige of affluent students and all people independently of their financial situation will have acess to this level of education.
Moreover, it is crucial that all students should have acess to universities as without this level of education the expectations and possibilities for a well-payed work are limited.
To conclude up, the gonverments should pay the tuition fee for students who are not able to afford these expenses as with this way the gonvernmets promote equality and chances for a better life for everyone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...ons. It is my personal belief that when a students fulfills all the requiments to be accep...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'these students'?
Suggestion: this student; these students
...onvernmets should provide assistance to these student by offering a free education requesting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11171662125 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85640991084 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465940054496 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3888101855 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.545454545 118.986275619 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3636363636 23.4991977007 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286999147995 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132509647025 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530937246528 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178330187855 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658112157033 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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