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Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.

Scientific research is the cornerstone for growth and development of any society, in fact it is what separates the developed countries from the third world countries. While it is necessary to allow the scientists operate and conduct their research freely, it is even more important to place limitations on their conduct to prevent going against humanity in the name of science.

During the renaissance period, many scientific discoveries were clamped down by the Church because their discoveries invalidate the church doctrines. The restriction and limitation is not to protect the human race against the dangers of scientific unethical methods but preserve the church control and hold over the society, this type of restriction is borderline selfish and pose great danger to science.

In the modern world, the government have established ethical codes of conduct that draw the line between scientific research and dehumanizing acts. Some scientist have been prosecuted for experimenting on humans like some sort of lab rat which they can dispose of anytime. These scientists argue that complexity of the human system is too much that experimenting on lower mammals like rat and mice wont give enough results. But this school of thought is flawed, because each human being have the right to life and to be treated as a human being in any situation.

If there are no restriction in scientific research and development, there will be nothing stopping rich and powerful nations in using their poor enemies as laboratory rats especially in war-fare. As was documented in Second World war where there was numerous reports of German laboratories turning enemy fighter into real life super soldiers. The Nazi forces were capturing injured and surrending soldiers to concentration camps where they tortured and were made to undergo unspeakable scientific experimental procedures, while most of these captured soldier died as a result of the procedure some were turn into monsters that are incapable of thinking except to obey command to terminate their enemy.

There are reports of big pharmaceuticals companies illegally using humans for drug trials which often results to catastrophic effect and even death of their subjects. Government organizations like FDA have constitutionalize guidelines needed to introduce new drugs into market, this include stages of laboratory testing before the drugs can be approved for clinicals testing on human subjects. This guidelines prevent the rich companies on preying on the poor and desperate whose life is seen as less valuable.

Conclusively, just like rule of law guiding our day to day activities, restriction on scientific research and development is important to keep their conduct in check and make sure scientist remember that their effort is ultimately to make human life better, not to engage in dehumanizing and demoralizing method in the process.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...or clinicals testing on human subjects. This guidelines prevent the rich companies o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, third, while, in fact, sort of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2456.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40969162996 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9506803924 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544052863436 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 770.4 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0750708566 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.733333333 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2666666667 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193432873521 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630786813704 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696002656747 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100901256639 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059940388327 0.0667264976115 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, third, while, in fact, sort of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments