The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Machine is a beautiful art of a human mind. To build any machine it required lots of human efforts and risk. The prompt says that human mind will always be superior to machine, in my not so humble opinion, I agree with the prompt that human mind is always superior to the machine for following reasons.
Firstly, every machine is byzantine creation which is created by human mind. It blatant that machine is created to do human work easy, so it follows every command of human. To make any machine it required lots of research and on the bases of the research machine is made. To make machine human mind first have to find plausible reason. For instance, phone was invented by Graham Bell, its purpose is to convey massage within fraction of sec, and before inventing this phone he first established that idea in his own mind. His mind started working on that byzantine idea of transfer of waves as a massage through wires after doing all research he was able to invent byzantine machine called phone. This proves that him mind was much stronger to imagine things which is not there in reality.
Secondly, human mind has made a particular machine for and particular purpose. There is no machine which can do everything. Machine have some limits which it cannot surpass where as human mind has no limits it can surpass any limit through imagination and imagination lead to create byzantine machine. For instance one can exemplify, phone is a machine which is only used to transfer massages it cannot do other work apart from transferring massage in same way if we consider another machine like washing machine it can only wash dirty cloths whereas a human mind can do all things which machine like creating other machine.
Thirdly, it is proven by performing many researches that human mind have more memory power than any machine or computer. Human mind have one power which no machine in this world posses “Imagination” human mind can imagine extraordinary things which don’t even exist whereas machine don’t have that ability. For instance, human mind can imagine making a time machine which doesn’t exist but it has some idea how it will work in the same way no machine have power of imagination. Machine is a slave of human mind it only does stuff which human mind want because it is created in that way.
In conclusion, human mind is always superior to machine in every possible way because human mind has made machine and creator is always superior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 427.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8056206089 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42407425545 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426229508197 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9112179099 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399716400175 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180884700234 0.0831039109588 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870096642508 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2970610003 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542643230575 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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