The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Innovation of machines are miracle of human minds. Generally, machines are designed to make human work easier, faster, convenient and more accurate. Similarly, machines are designed according to need of human beings and are calibrated according to the situation. Although, machines seem to be superior in terms of functionality; actually they are inferior to human mind as human mind operates them according to their need. Therefore, I strongly take the position that the human minds are superior to machines because machines are only the tools of human intelligence and innovativeness.
Firstly, with the evolution of human civilization, the practices of developing new tools according to the demand or scarcity is going on in the societies. Human minds are creative in the sense that they always try to invent sometime new according to their needs. For example- To fulfill the demand of food resources, human started plantation and agriculture from the very beginning of civilization. To start the cultivation of agriculture, there is always a demand of tools for cultivating food resources. With the innovation of chisels to modern farming tools equipment in order to increase productivity or production of surplus food items, human minds are always active in designing, manufacturing of tools needed to them from micros tools to macro equipment’s. Similarly, in hunting process to obtain meat and skin, from tradition pointed tools up to modern automatic gun fires, people minds are full of innovative ideas.
Secondly, the innovation and advancement of technology are the results of human intelligence or innovativeness. In the past, it was very hard or cumbersome to convey message from one place to another and it was possible either through tie the message written in the page in pigeon’s legs or physical delivery system. As modern problems require modern solution, the old tradition system of conveying message was replaced by postal services. In today’s world, it takes smaller time interval less than blinking of an eye to deliver message either doing emails or dropping message through new applications like messenger, viber and WhatsApp. Similarly, it is cumbersome to deliver items from one place to another place. In the histories, mules, horses and donkeys are used to convey goods and items due to lack of road services and transports. With the development of highways and vehicles, goods are conveyed easily, conveniently and without damage or theft and this process takes a few time in comparison to old tradition system.
Thirdly, through the development of robots and modern tools in mechanization of industries, the production capacities of the industries have been increased drastically. Nowadays, products are manufactured without voids and errors and large quantities through the helps of automatic tools and robotic system. As these tools can work fullest without rest and emotions fulfilling the demands of mankind and industries. Although, they are more vigorous in terms of capacity and production, they need human minds to operate. In case of malfunction, their repair is possible only through human assistance. In order to change the design and functionality of the process in manufacturing good items in terms of saving money and time, human mind plays an important role.
However, some may argue that although human has built them, they surpass human in terms of capacity. These machines can work without rest and emotions all day and night. They are not required to pay salary and needed little maintenance although human can feel sick and affected by the emotions in term of output of work. Although, they are more powerful than human in terms of work and memory, human intelligence plays a major role in correcting steps when there is malfunctions in machine. Thus, there is quote saying human minds start thinking when there is a stoppage of machine.
In conclusion, machines cannot surpass human mind as machines tools are the gift of human creativeness or innovativeness. These machines are outdated without human beings and these machines need human mind to operate and repair in case of emergency.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 980, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...amage or theft and this process takes a few time in comparison to old tradition system. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are malfunctions'?
Suggestion: there are malfunctions
...s a major role in correcting steps when there is malfunctions in machine. Thus, there is quote saying...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 116.0 58.6224719101 198% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3494.0 2235.4752809 156% => OK
No of words: 659.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30197268589 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06665523852 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90933724367 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450682852807 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1102.5 704.065955056 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1484111383 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.709677419 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2580645161 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38709677419 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279203626391 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879101887126 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851093752566 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17607791591 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108269368327 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 167.0 100.480337079 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 980, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...amage or theft and this process takes a few time in comparison to old tradition system. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are malfunctions'?
Suggestion: there are malfunctions
...s a major role in correcting steps when there is malfunctions in machine. Thus, there is quote saying...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 116.0 58.6224719101 198% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3494.0 2235.4752809 156% => OK
No of words: 659.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30197268589 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06665523852 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90933724367 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450682852807 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1102.5 704.065955056 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1484111383 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.709677419 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2580645161 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38709677419 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279203626391 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879101887126 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851093752566 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17607791591 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108269368327 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 167.0 100.480337079 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.