If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Every course of action, no matter how small, starts with a goal in mind. Goals serve as a blue print, which if provided with right means will always provide us with the intended results. The prompt suggests that If a goal is worthy, any means taken to attain it can be justified. I somewhat disagree with taking up any route to make something happen. Goals should always be attainable, without compromising on the means taken - based on the following.
While establishing goals and attaining them is important for individuals, and societies in general. It is also important to remember that we take an ethical and uncompromising approach while attaining our goals. A goal attained might bring us temporary relief and a sense of satisfaction. However, anything achieved through manipulation or blatant disregard for ethics will only bring more problems in the future. For instance, the automobile industry giant, Volkswagen has faced severe criticism from international community about 2 years back, when it used deceptive means to indicate faulty pollution emission readings. The company's reputation, which was carefully nurtured for decades, tarnished. Volkswagen had pay millions of dollars as a fine. With that being said, had it been that the company worked on enhancing its cars to emanate lesser pollutants; it would have saved millions of dollars and saved the environment also.
There is no limit to man's potential; it is also true that there are no boundaries to human desires. We are always looking for more. We want more money, more power and what not. With this innate human weakness called 'desire for more', it is only natural that we quite often than not step out of an ethical path, and people do things that they regret later. We all should have goals and desires - the world is making rapid progress because of our vision and mission to make our world a better place. While it is not wrong to have desires; we must be wary of what are goals are and how we would attain them. 'I want to get rich', is a desire which can be attained in different ways. A few, noble, would work hard and earn their living and eventually become prosperous. While others, might take a short-cut and end up becoming thieves. Universe loves to maintain symmetry; at some point the thief is termed as a criminal and thrown into a jail. The noble, hardworking are celebrated for a life-time.
It is true, sometimes, 'Rules are meant to be broken.' But often than not, we always have two paths to attain the same goal - one is based on righteousness, and the other is based on qualifying ethics. The former direction is always the best.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ind. Goals serve as a blue print, which if provided with right means will always p...
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Line 3, column 928, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ns of dollars and saved the environment also. There is no limit to mans potential; ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, while, for instance, in general, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84855233853 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62975866362 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574610244989 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9241770934 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6296296296 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6296296296 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85185185185 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209211576803 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055854442982 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973336371006 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136243591183 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109953119643 0.0667264976115 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.