If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Dreams and goals are important part of our life. Person without goal is dead from inside. Prompt suggest that if a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. In my not so humble opinion, I mostly agree with the prompt. If goal is worthy one should try to achieve it in any condition and all action taken for that goal is worthy.
To begin with, big goals take big sacrifices, if you want to achieve big goals in life you should be willing to sacrifice big or you should be ready to take plausible action for it. Some time people will not able to see the goals which you are holding in your mind or they will think that it is debacle but if you see it is worthy then you should be ready to take action for it. For instance, back in olden days people use to think that it is impossible to go to moon but Neil Armstrong proved it wrong by becoming first man stepping on the moon. While going on the moon he was aware risk he has put his life on the line it is blatant that he was ready to sacrifice his life to achieve that goal. But when he achieves his goal he becomes the first man to step on the moon.
However, risking something important in your life is directly proportional to the worth of the goal. If goal seems to be small in front of sacrifice it need then it is blatant to leave that goal and start working on next one. For instance, one can exemplify if a person took a big project which required almost a year and deadline for the project is in next month then he is risking his job for one project it may lead to debacle. If risk in the goal is very high then outcome then it is better to avoided but if outcome leads to lucrative then it is blatant to take risk or any apt action to achieve that goal.
Finally, from past experiences person can make out easily whether this goal is worth of taking risk and action it needed or not. If he/she thinks my taking valid action it may lead to lucrative then he/she should take it without thinking because he/she knows his/her true potential.
In conclusion, in spite of being byzantine discussion, I think that it is plausible that if the goal is worthy, then any mean taken to attain it are justifiable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... to achieve that goal. Finally, from past experiences person can make out easily whether this...
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...chieve that goal. Finally, from past experiences person can make out easily whether this...
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...se he/she knows his/her true potential. In conclusion, in spite of being byzanti...
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...orthy, then any mean taken to attain it are justifiable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24047619048 5.05705443957 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20960975818 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42380952381 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6952356777 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.764705882 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7058823529 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270847246037 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930995107412 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778124464272 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151353093239 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565270270158 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 12.1639044944 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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