If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable.
Our argument today lies over the statement that any person looking forward to achieve a worthy goal is allowed to achieve it either by hook or by crook. Dream is not visuals that you see while you sleep, they are images or hopes that aspire you to work hard and not sleep. Each and every person in this world wakes up in the morning
to do something meaningful with his life and to achieve something and those who don't aspire to find the meaning of their lives and goals. Some hope to achive small goals while some hope to go big and fullfill their lives destiny and the upper call. But it would be wrongful to say that whatever the goal is any menthod to achieve it will be justified. I strongly oppose this statement and behold contradictory views over this. There are always two paths to acquire any goal and always the rightous way of achieving will be recieved with apprecitation.
To achieve anything in your lives we need to work hard gain suficent knowledge of it, apply the knowledge at the best point with our 100% efforts and than wait for it's result. As Lord Krishna rightfully said a versa in holy texts of Gita, " Put your efforts and the results will show up you need not to worry about the result". Hence if we have the right intension and are willing to put in all our hardwork results will show up and we will achieve what we were meant to achieve. Always as a coin has two faces every task, every goal has two ways of reaching it and everytime the right one will require hardwork and time, the wrong one can be easy and less painstaking but would at the cost of something. For example in a school there are two boys, first one is a hardworking student who study each and everyday for hours and give the best he can in studies while the other one is the son of a rich politican, he is a brat and just recklessly spends money. During exames they both inspire to get the first rank. One studied hard which is they right way while other using his dad's money bought the paper a day before the exams and hence they both scored equal and achieved the top rank in the school. Clearly everybody who reads this example will know that first kids hardwork will be appreciated and the second kid's work will be punished. Therefore it is quite clear that the right way is always appreciated.
Along with this we can need to find the goals and their being right or not. If someone want to revenge the death of his father because he was given a wrong medicine mistakenly by the hosptial we intended to kill the doctor, this goal is worthy for him. Is there anyway the society will accept it? Will be any way soceity will let it happen? Another instance is there is two commuinty both works for the betterment of the world. One commuinty tries to encourage people through drives and public campain and they spread awarness among the people how this world can be a better place and how we togther can save our mother earth. While second commuinty believes that all the problems are raised by over increasing population and hence started bombing places and killing millions of people. It is quite clear to us if asked which commuinty will be allowed to function. We cringe as we have read about the working of the second commuinty indeed they were working for a better world but the way they were to achieved the goals were not recommanded and apploaded.
Therefore it is quite clear to us that goals are a superficious thing and everytime to achieve a goal there can be many more methods to achieve it. But there is only one right method to do it and that only will be accpected by the society. Thus even if the goal is worthy but the method to achieve is not right it will be excuated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to achieving'.
Suggestion: to achieving
...atement that any person looking forward to achieve a worthy goal is allowed to achieve it ...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on in this world wakes up in the morning to do something meaningful with his life...
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Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and to achieve something and those who dont aspire to find the meaning of their liv...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...he best point with our 100% efforts and than wait for its result. As Lord Krishna ri...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
...d the results will show up you need not to worry about the result'. Hence if we hav...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ed not to worry about the result'. Hence if we have the right intension and are ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... achieve what we were meant to achieve. Always as a coin has two faces every task, eve...
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Line 5, column 814, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... hardworking student who study each and everyday for hours and give the best he can in s...
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Line 5, column 1350, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... the second kids work will be punished. Therefore it is quite clear that the right way is...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...nd their being right or not. If someone want to revenge the death of his father beca...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... were not recommanded and apploaded. Therefore it is quite clear to us that goals are ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... only will be accpected by the society. Thus even if the goal is worthy but the meth...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, hence, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 42.0 19.5258426966 215% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 39.0 14.8657303371 262% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 33.0505617978 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3024.0 2235.4752809 135% => OK
No of words: 685.0 442.535393258 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41459854015 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11590702189 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23676886526 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439416058394 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 943.2 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7260404267 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4642857143 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745719663117 0.243740707755 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259795745762 0.0831039109588 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343251821987 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05964594763 0.150359130593 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357612385751 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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