Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time.”
The more thing is from our comfort zone, the more it is acceptable. The prompt says that any truths start with refusing and it is treated as outrageous in particular that attckes the people beilefs or what they are used to it. I totally agree as the person always be more comfortable with the ideas which herited from past and get customed to it in his daily life.
The main reason behind people refusing to any new truths that they are acting out of fear from unkown or out of what they are taught from their ancestors. For example, before from several decades people believe that earth is stright and not rounded. However, when the truth that the earth is rounded and not stright land, people didn’t easilly accepted that idea. In that days to come and say to one that earth is rounded, how can he imagine that there are some others in the other part of that sphere shape which undescirnable by normal thinking. Some people didn’t accept the idea of being upside down in the other part of earth. However, by time pass and technology development, falks could see that personally in such live movies from space which are released from NASA. Ulimately, this outrageous truth became accepted. This example indicates why any new idea even it is a truth why it is faced by refusing.
Another example illustrates to what extent people will be suspecious towards any truth out of their customary beliefs. From 1400 PC, people was beileve that God is just the statue that they are created by themselves. These statues were being making from stones and even detes and when one feels hungery eats it although these statues were considered their God who pray form him and ask him for their needs. When prophet Mohammed came and ask them to submit to God who doesn’t have similar in the earth and he is only one, they didn’t accept that idea and didn’t leave what they took from their parents and herited from their ancestors.
Further, when Gallieo declared that the earth move around the sun and not visa versa, what did happened to him? The cleric men who believe in the opposite didn’t believe in him and accused him being heretic and he deviate from the religion. Because of strange idea or deviated out of they were being taught in the church they sentenced him to life perisonment. What is believed now regard the earth and sun? it compelety became accepted when the astronemers could proof that with more advanced tools and technology; they led to no chance for doubts. All the above examples show that any thruth out of our norms or what we are delivered from our ancestors treated as deviation or heresy.
In conclusion, truth in some people’ eyes is what they used to deal with since they were born or what is they herited from their past. Otherwise, they will don’t accept that truth easilly to attacks their beliefs until these truth can proof themselves by evidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...part of earth. However, by time pass and technology development, falks could see ...
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Suggestion: PCs
...t of their customary beliefs. From 1400 PC, people was beileve that God is just th...
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Suggestion: happen
...nd the sun and not visa versa, what did happened to him? The cleric men who believe in ...
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Suggestion: It
... believed now regard the earth and sun? it compelety became accepted when the astr...
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Message: Did you mean 'this truth' or 'these truths'?
Suggestion: this truth; these truths
... easilly to attacks their beliefs until these truth can proof themselves by evidence. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 29.0 11.3162921348 256% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 33.0505617978 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72047244094 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25175168275 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478346456693 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1575563394 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.260869565 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0869565217 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52173913043 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0810960063233 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319814611284 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434661510761 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055259826984 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371723096742 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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