Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
In the current days, Technology is regarded as air for everyone; the world cannot step further without Technology. The prompt languishes this importance of Technology and sieges it on mere one sentence that modern applications complicate our life. In fact, it is quite the opposite; without Technology, the whole globe would be like a disabled one for several reasons; the most crucial two of them will be being discussed in the following essay.
Firstly, there is a famous saying that “ the need is the cornerstone for the invention”, without our needs; if Technology doesn’t exist. For example, before inventing the aircraft, how was the world; it was so difficult to transport from place to another. In 1917, White brothers concocted the best invention is being known in life. By this invention, the world became like one entity. For example, aeroplane helps in trade exchanges between countries and education; student now can easily decide which country wants to study. In addition, the aeroplane has a significant role in curbing 2020 pandemic, when Coronavirus invaded the world, some countries’ medical systems collapsed because of increasing and widespread of this virus. As a solution to this crisis, there were two solutions, first, to fail those overwhelmed countries to counter this catastrophe or to ask help from other countries. The aeroplane had a creat role in transporting whole hospitals for those overwhelmed countries. The above example illustrates to what extent this invention (aircraft) is contributing to easing our life not to make it more convoluted as the prompt said.
Secondly, more evidence for Technology’s role in easing our life is contributing to facilitating life at the individual level on a daily basis. For example, if look at those people who in the past suffer from incapacitation, how was their life if one needed to buy something just from the nearest supermarket, of course, it was not feasible. However, now, Technology provides the solution to help those people “ online shopping” now one can buy what he wants by mere press a button in an application on his phone. Even if he wants to go out to buy by himself; he can by another invention is provided by technology “ electric wheelchair” this a great machine which helps incapacitated people to move around without asking help; thus, Technology has an essential role in easing our life and makes it more accessible.
In conclusion, Technology has an enormous effect on our daily basis, and without these all facilities which are provided by Technology; life would be unfeasible and more complicated.
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...ur life and makes it more accessible. In conclusion, Technology has an enormou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97579625005 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538823529412 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4415979508 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134427009507 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497586931019 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611520299407 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967684919496 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233800181046 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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