the increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
As the mankind moves forward the pace of life also keeps changing and today life of human is moving at a rapid pace.By the pace of life we mean the changes which happens in one life and today these changes happen at a brisk rate thereby making our life rapid.these changes affect us in both negative and positive way.
people have started become more adaptive to changes in the rapid moving lifestyle.Earlier we used to be rigid and hesitant in accepting the changes but now changes are welcomed if they are for our betterment.these rapid pace of lifestyle has made people more ambitious as they want to keep up with the pace of the generation.However, In these chase of desire certain valuable things are left behind like spending time with our near and dear.Also to be forerunner in these race of life people start compromising with their moral values and ethics.
one of the main reasons behind these rapid pace is the continously evolving science and technology these has to be consider as one of its advantage.However a lot of new technology become obsolete within a small time period thereby creating problems for users thrieving to update themselves with the newer one.Also the customer is provided with the wide range of options making it difficult for him to choose and the clashes among brands always keeps the customer in doubt of who is superior.
Finally I would like to conclude that even though the increasing rapid pace of life has created certain problems in todays life there doesn’t seems to be any option than to adapt with the pace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 269.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.843866171 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76158891268 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 23.0359550562 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.772070317 60.3974514979 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.75 118.986275619 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.25 23.4991977007 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.21951772744 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301227990302 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203601404816 0.0831039109588 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120448229623 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203601404816 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120448229623 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 14.1392134831 248% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 48.8420337079 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 12.1743820225 241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.98 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.38706741573 126% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 11.2143820225 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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